A Special Dream

Friends posted by Loveless187 - September 27th 2012

ive had a dream that was like a story. a place my mind called "Zarloma"..... upon entering the dream, i woke up in a pathway. behind was a thick mist, in front below was a huge hole that seemed to go on forever, and above the hole was a metal cross-hatch fence on one of the two walls that blocked me in this path. i climbed it across the hole and kept going through the path till it ended at a dark gate. i felt the air pull me in as whispers called out to me. i walk inside to a huge gardenlike maze and somehow... i knew my way out. i followed the voices, feeling eyes all around me. i notice shadows in the groves and bushes, young children staring at me, all had a blank face... i rush through till i discover a huge mansion. it looked like a school, a college most likely. i go up to the gates and stop, people stare at me from the other side, all in darkness. they ask why im here, that i shudnt be. i just look at them, they sneer, saying my name with disgust. "let me in", using those firm words was surprising, i dont have the courage to say anything against anyone but... i felt like a leader in that moment. they open the gates, watching me go in without saying a word. i tell them thank u and they look away, closing the gate, then disappear again in the darkness, saying sorry. i go into the school, it had a pretty lobby with a desk and sign in sheet. i look at the sheet, ready to write my name down, when i feel somebody behind me. they hold my arms tight, i hear my name in multiple whispers. they tell me im not suppose to be here, i free my arms and look to see them, gone.. scared, i walk into the room on the left, a hallway full of gold mailboxes all over the walls. a very quiet whisper behind me says that each one holds something precious to everyone in the world. i look back to see a girl hunched over, a cloak over her face, she hid more behind so i cudnt see her..from behind, she gives me a key. her hand touched mine quick, but i cud feel the dry, crackled skin or bones.. she gently pushes me, showing me a mailbox that felt interesting to me even though they all looked the same. i felt something inside the box call my name louder and louder till i stuck "my" key inside it. i turned the key and opened it, inside were small blank sheets of paper, an eraser and a pencil..i stared a while then thought i was being made fun of, so i turned around to the girl, now gone... i close the mailbox, lock it and walked down the hallway. suddenly i was surprised by my friends. i smile at them but they run by me as if i was a ghost they hadnt seen. i tried calling their names but they just kept talking and walkin away. i felt sad, then noticed that some people were looking at me, i look back happily.. only to see more blank faces. i asked who they were, but they just stood and stared. finally one speaks, telling me that i "shudnt be here"...

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My Dream come true

posted by Loveless187 - Mon, 04/01/2013 - 2:49am

I found the boy I've been looking for~

~Dream After Story~

posted by Loveless187 - Sun, 02/17/2013 - 9:10pm

i remember now that i wasnt the only one born in that world..there was a little girl with dark eyes, long hair..she looked at me and smiled saying "i love u mama" she hugs me and i smile at her, but in my mind i question myself as to who i rly am and who is she rly......i think ill name her Nami..she goes to gather flowers and puts them in my hair saying "pretty", i take some and put them in her hair and the rest we decorate the rock structure with... we sit in the grass looking at the fountains and all around us...the boy comes over and sits with us, hugging the girl and holding my hand, his face is blurred now but if i close my eyes i can see him barely, smiling...they both say that they miss me.................... who am i?

(to help u read)

posted by Loveless187 - Wed, 01/02/2013 - 5:25am

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if u wanna read the rest of the story or if u feel confused. u read the story from the bottom to the top comments :p this story is for teens by (1) teen, if u like scary and romance then have fun reading ^o^

(the final dream)

posted by Loveless187 - Wed, 01/02/2013 - 5:15am

i fall asleep to darkness and wake up in the woods. there was a man with black hair and red eyes staring at me, he was touching something in front of him that looked like a force field which he broke through and he appeared really close to me. he had a black cloak on with red images (that made me think of itachi lol), he grins and whispers in my ear "even that couldnt stop me from getting in with u" i grow hot at this and he chuckles at this. i was about to run when he slammed his hand into the tree behind me to which he cornered me. the tree broke in as if it were another world, he pushed me in and i pass through these bright blue lights and land softly on my feet. i felt like i jad that day in the room with curtains, light like a feather and the room was the same shade of blue. i blink and hes there with me, his red eyes looked at me putting me in a trance. i stray away and notice a bed and nothing on both of us, he pushed me and i fell. he said he was sorry and when i blinked again he was the boy that i met before. he kept saying sorry, that he loves me and that he lied cuz we will never see each other again. that was when he broke the frozen flower and said that he will love me forever no matter what and ill find a real boy in real life. at that moment i knew the boy's name and everything we were before i forgot him. when we came to, i woke up in sweat, my stomach hurt and it was hard to walk..

(next dream continued)

posted by Loveless187 - Wed, 01/02/2013 - 4:39am

i went to sleep again...and woke up to the hallway when i first appeared in Zarloma. it was dark and eerie, the mist had surrounded all around me and it had begun to rain. i sit there a while staring at the hole with no fence on the side for me to cross. i felt so sad, then i notice a person standing on the other side of the hole. it was the boy. i looked at him smiling but then i stopped when i noticed his face was becoming faceless. he looked back at me with hurt eyes, then started to walk toward me. i yell at him to stop that he'll fall in the hole, but he keeps going. he doesnt fall..he walks over it like it was a trick floor. he stands watching me in the rain and says that hes sorry. i ask him who he was and he replies but i cant hear him. i ask again getting closer but i still cant hear him, like his voice was muted. finally i get tired and he tells me that hes sorry and that one day ill see him in real life. i looked at him as he smiled to this, but it was a different smile.. a fake one. he says goodbye and i wake up once again, crying for no reason that i cud find.

(continued)

posted by Loveless187 - Wed, 01/02/2013 - 4:09am

..i couldnt take those faces anymore, i sit down against the rock closing my eyes full of tears saying to myself over and over to wake up. i feel warm all of a sudden as i open my eyes to the boy hugging me as he did in the other dream. he tells me that he doesnt want me to leave and my face is hot again. i turn away but he brings my face back to looking at him. he says stay still, then puts a flower in my hair. i felt much better with him there, every faceless being was gone and it was sunny again. his eyes looked pretty in the sunlight, they were a sparkling green with yellow and lightblue colors. i smiled when he joked about me being scared in such a nice place, i didnt care if he made fun of me, he wasnt real. as i thought this, he grabbed my shoulders firmly and looked me in the eyes saying that he cant wait anymore that if he says this that ill be gone. i look at him confused as he tells me how he misses me and that he loves me so much, then he kisses me.. for a fake boy, he sure gave a real kiss.. i look back at him crying and notice my hands were becoming see through, i was disappearing into tiny bright lights. he kisses me again till my body is gone and i float away with the lights on the wind watching him reach out for me crying as his world goes dark...

(comment)

posted by Loveless187 - Tue, 01/01/2013 - 6:05pm

didnt mean to write that twice e.e

i fall asleep... wake up in

posted by Loveless187 - Tue, 01/01/2013 - 6:03pm

i fall asleep... wake up in a garden of Zarloma. it was so beautiful with its warm grass, shining sun, fountains and sparrows. i wanted to stay there forever watching. i notice the boy sitting by himself on a stone structure looking at the grass below. i wanted to call out to him but i then remembered last time and kept quiet. he decided to look up in my direction and spotted me. he smiles and motions me to come over, to which i just walk away pretending i didnt c him, then.. he loudly calls my name. i froze, look back to his wide grin and he once again motions me over. i walk slowly towards him not looking directly at him. i take a look at the birds in the fountain since im much closer now, only to find the birds still and looking back at me with blank faces. i gasped in fright as i notice children all of a sudden in the now shaded garden staring at me. i run to the rock, but the boy isnt there anymore and i panic..

(continued, in another dream)

posted by Loveless187 - Tue, 01/01/2013 - 5:55pm

once again i fell asleep... woke up in the garden area of the mansion in Zarloma. it was so beautiful with its warm grass, shining sun, fountains with clear water and golden yellow sparrows flying about. i wanted to stay there forever just watching, then i notice the boy from the other dream sitting by himself on a stone structure looking at the grass below. i wanted to call out to him but i then i remembered what happened last time and kept quiet. unfortunately he decided to look up in my direction and spotted me. he smiles and motions for me to come over, to which i just walk away trying to pretend i didnt c him, then.. he loudly calls my name. i froze, look back to his wide grin and he once again motions me again. i walk slowly towards him not looking directly at him. i take a look at the birds in the fountain since im much closer now, only to find the birds still and looking back at me with blank faces. i gasped in fright as i noticed children all of a sudden in the now shaded garden staring at me, whispering my name. i run towards the rock and make it there, the boy isnt there anymore and i panic...

(continued)

posted by Loveless187 - Tue, 01/01/2013 - 5:26pm

....i get up and walk through the curtains feeling sad and confused of where the boy went, then i was suddenly pulled out and into the bright lit hallway. i recognized that it was a teacher, who told me that i should be lining up like the rest of the students and not dilly-dallying. i start arguing that it was not my fault and notice the boy behind him. i tell him that it was the boys fault and the teacher replies with "what boy?", the boy smirks at me and watches me from the door as the teacher leads me away back to the door to the lobby, which then at the moment i instantly woke up frustrated in bed...

(continued)

posted by Loveless187 - Tue, 01/01/2013 - 5:13pm

..a beautiful melody played silently as i walked into the room. the curtains started to sway in a dance that made me move too. i felt like i let go of everything in the world that held me down, like i was light as a feather and soon i didnt even feel my feet. this bliss felt like hours or even days, the music playing much louder than before, the boy smiling as he watched me. he took my hand and we dance through the curtains, which now felt soft like feathers, thinner than tissue, but strong. i didnt feel tired at all, i felt exhilirated! we danced closer, he was warm, then he held my face with one hand carefully, the other holding my lower back as he dipped me. the music goes very quiet as his face moves close to mine. looking very serious with his bright eyes, my face goes hot and i close my eyes...all of a sudden the music stops completely and i feel cold. i open my eyes to find myself laying on the floor with the curtains very still and dark....

(continued)

posted by Loveless187 - Sat, 12/15/2012 - 2:45am

i stare back at their blank faces with wonder, but the more i looked at them, the more i felt a pain growing in my chest that i cudnt ignore. i look away and walk down the hall more till i see no more blank faces or friends even. i think about why im here, then i notice someone looking at me again, but somehow it felt different. it made me shiver in a way that felt good. i look at the person, who turns out to be the first guy ive seen here with an actual face; however, this wasnt a familiar face i was seeing. he looks at me, smiles, and walks past the archway where he was standing. hes out of sight, so i decide to follow him. as i walk toward his way, a announcement calls for all students to line up...i wondered if i was student or not, but that didnt matter because my feet wouldnt stop and kept toward him. he goes into this corridor with so many twists and turns that it felt like it would go on forever...he went a bit faster than expected, i catch glimpses of a smile while he turns each corridor, then i stop. i notice a door that is cracked open a lil, i decide to go in and check to see if he was there. the room is amazing, filled every corner with a curtain that turned lightblue with the moonlight shining through a window on the side of the wall that faced the door...