public995Group Leader: thirentyCreated: 06/12/10

final fantasy fanfic anybody?

Posted by hernanjosea
04/12/13 09:02

Hey, just got done reading your fanfic. I think you know where your weaknesses are in your grammar, so don't worry too much about it. Also, there is going to be a grammatic change in the characters speech because you're capturing their "slang". I have not played FF13-2, but I have played up to 13. All in all its pretty good! Will you be joining the RP that is starting soon? Keep up the writing. Thesauraus' aren't dinosaurs.

final fantasy fanfic anybody?

Posted by thirenty
04/14/13 08:43

sis,use the advises:)
I still didnt get the chance to read but I will soon:)