So, this is something I've decided to work on to enhance my writing abilities.
Yes, the spacing might be weird, sentences might be odd, and all that. Feel free to point it out to me, I'd appreciate it. I'll just be posting some things here and there every so often, so I'll be sure to link you to the post/page. =3
It was a bright. sunny day on Siwa Island.
As the sunlight seeped through the holes in the tattered makeshift curtains, the Jelly Rabbits slowly began to wake up. Moving about in the cramped, hollow, pine tree that they called their home, the preparations for the day had begun.
Chef Jelly Rabbit had already started to make breakfast. He glanced at the supply of food near him, and sighed. Another shortage of food, eh? Oh well... Grabbing a grey bag labled, "Deer Meat" he took out an amount that would be enough to fill 5 rabbits. Deciding it was a bit too much after seeing what was left in the bag, he stuffed some back in and put the grey bag back. He placed the cutting board on the huge, flat, grey rock and took out a knife. Moving to the cooking fire, he grabbed the water bucket and poured it's contents into the pot above the fire. Moving on to something else so as not to waste time, he moved back to the 'counter'.
Using his utmost concentration, he swiftly cubed the meat, and placed it in a wooden bowl. He then returned to the food supply, and looked around for what he wanted. After finding what he wanted, he returned and began to cook the meat. Moving back, he slowly placed the brown bag filled with 'Crushed Bark' on the counter. He opened a different bag, filled with tools and whatnot, and took out a small wooden hammer. Pouring the Crushed Bark into a deep, wooden plate, Chef Jelly Rabbit began to hammer the bark. After it had became something similar to flour, he was content. Later, someone bounced into the kitchen area. His assistant had woken up. Jalla peered at what Chef Jelly was doing, and knew instantly. She looked towards him, who gave her a nod. Humming a tune to herself, she grabbed the plate and worked on it.
Hmm, I'll end it at about here. I can't think of anything else. D= (Except making it into a diary-type of thing, but maybe not.)
What do you think of it so far? Constructive Criticism, mean comments, whatever, they're loved around here. ;3 Haha.
Also, if you think I should give up, delete this and go practise somewhere else, feel free to say so out loud. 'Cause I wonder how you would write it out.