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Azureballs

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PostedSep 05, 2009 1:46 pm

My fan fiction plz read

The truth behind Paien Lab

I’m sitting here, in this helicopter flying from a place they call “Paien Lab” wondering how I got here. Thinking of what has become of me I am no longer considered human and I am a one of a kind of my “new found race” developed in the halls of that death riddled research center.
It all started two days ago. I was enlisted in a military division called “O.M.G.O.” it stood for Outer Military-Government Operations. A US military division so under the table that the president him self didn’t even know it was in motion controlling most of the operations going on in the Middle-East.
It was 3ohundred hours when I got that life changing phone call. A strange man said we are going to have you escorted to a top secret location for training. Four hours later I was in the mountains some where in Europe doing basic endurance training and practicing my sharp shooting.
Then it began I went to the mess hall and took a drink of my water I blacked out and woke up in a electrified cage with three men standing over me putting dozens of needles in my neck and arms then I blacked out again. Finding my self in the same cage I was in some unknown hours ago. After a few hours I found out what those shots where for when a man with a wolfs upper torso and a humans lower body went by he was limp and life less.
Then it all started I began to transform I was becoming something I thought never was real I was an all black wolf human creature I guess you would call it a “were wolf” I started to be able to freely transform back and forth from human to the were wolf form. I started to discover powers that the men said that where “unique” I could create orbs of darkness that explode and become a bullet shield and hide me like a smoke grenade. I could also control light and make complete darkness in the brightest of days. They called me a “night wolf”
Then came the day of my release they said I would be enlisted in a special ops force called “wolf team” to be deployed in the Himalayas to hunt down the leaders of the Taliban and other terrorist attacks. So is the start of the rest of my life, to be a slave of the military and to never see my friends or family again.


-- Sergeant Major Eric “Dawns Doom”
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simplypie

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PostedSep 05, 2009 2:16 pm
lol epic.....very nice most people would be embarressed to post something like this but you really pulled it off ^^well written too most people who make a thread talk in "1337" anyways overall good description of how you beilive a "Wolf" would feel

if i reply to your topic,it must be pretty damm important,either that or im bored.

Azureballs

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PostedSep 05, 2009 2:19 pm
thank you i always loved writing and this i would consider one of my "i made it out of boredom" stories.

nikaidou278

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PostedOct 06, 2009 1:07 am

Hmm

I got confused, because you lacked a few periods, and used no comas whatsoever.

Usernam3

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PostedOct 09, 2009 3:29 pm
xD "O.M.G.O" just one letter too much... Razz and the night wolf sounds pretty cool.

PraetorianX

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PostedFeb 20, 2010 6:58 pm
nice story, keep it up Smile

CoonApe

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PostedMar 26, 2010 10:25 am

Like it

I liked it but you lacked comas quotations and some periods. And paine lab is in france, so why is it a USA base? Should check out my Origin of beserk. I just made #2. Other than those few mess ups i rather liked it.

Thanks to infam0us for sig!
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