Thank you so much!
All that was really helpful! I have to admit, I was kinda scared there for a while. haha
I hope you don't mind me posting your "critique" on our forum. I think Drazen will be happy with your comment(s) about Alteos
Oh yes, and I totally agree with you about rereading it. I REALLY need to do a final edit. lol
I've been trying to get it all up on the forum, so I never went back through with a fine comb. *puts it on list of things to do*
And I hope we kept (and keep) you interested!
Our first chapter sure blew you away. I hope we keep blowing you away as it continues to grow!