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Ichiban012

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PostedApr 04, 2013 12:03 am
ckdragonck wrote:
PaneTenshiOkami wrote:
Ichiban012 wrote:
ckdragonck wrote:
Honestly, I wasn't doing it for you. Even I had trouble understanding what you wrote, no offense.  


I could read it just fine. No need to be mean.  


I could read it, too. Someone is just looking for justification to be a grammar ****.  


Not for justification. We never need justification. It's just who we are. It's what we do.




"The protectors of grammar from its abusers; but, at the same time, Internet killjoys."

Ah, how I love this job...  
At least the beginning of this story isn't an eye sore. Your story has too many colors, it gives me a headache just trying to look at the words.

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ckdragonck

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PostedApr 04, 2013 12:05 am
Ichiban012 wrote:
At least the beginning of this story isn't an eye sore.  


It is to me.

And if you don't like the colors, just highlight it. I did that so the readers would not get confused as to who is saying what.

Ichiban012

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PostedApr 04, 2013 12:08 am
ckdragonck wrote:
Ichiban012 wrote:
At least the beginning of this story isn't an eye sore.  


It is to me.

And if you don't like the colors, just highlight it. I did that so the readers would not get confused as to who is saying what.  
if you want to do that just add "so-and-so said/replied/ ect." and if this is such an eyesore to you, don't read it, just as I am not reading yours.

ckdragonck

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PostedApr 04, 2013 12:18 am
Ichiban012 wrote:
If you want to do that, just add "so-and-so said/replied/ ect." If this is such an eyesore to you, don't read it - just as I am not reading yours.  


Your passion... It moves me so! And so, I will concede this day.

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PostedApr 04, 2013 12:20 am

I Died

You know what? I thought this was a flame thread.
But when I actually read the story with Morgan Freeman's voice. I think I died a little inside. Laughing

Wait..
*looks at the previous replies*

Ichiban012

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PostedApr 04, 2013 12:24 am
oh it's a good story. ckdragon's just being something I can't say without being more censored than a sentinel.

PaneTenshiOkami

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PostedApr 04, 2013 6:54 am
ckdragonck wrote:
PaneTenshiOkami wrote:
Ichiban012 wrote:
ckdragonck wrote:
Honestly, I wasn't doing it for you. Even I had trouble understanding what you wrote, no offense.  


I could read it just fine. No need to be mean.  


I could read it, too. Someone is just looking for justification to be a grammar ****.  


Not for justification. We never need justification. It's just who we are. It's what we do.




"The protectors of grammar from its abusers; but, at the same time, Internet killjoys."

Ah, how I love this job...  


Okay, I laughed reading this post Laughing

I made my own signature. It my not be the prettiest girl at the ball, but I'm **** proud of it.

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PostedApr 24, 2013 5:17 pm
MORGAN FREEMAN

WHERES THE CROWBAR!?

MastaJ16

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PostedApr 24, 2013 5:52 pm

Message from Author

Since everyone is a critic I tossed out all the work I did on this.

~Request For Deletion Please~

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