Yea, I have quite a few tips for you.

- Try to record with Fraps or Dxtory. (I assume you recorded it with F9?) Fraps/Dxtory makes you able to play with 60+ fps and record with 30. Makes everything more smooth and easier watchable. It's a bit annoying to see a laggy recording.
- Try to make more streaks, obviously.
- Try to make more headshots. Bodyshots are a bit lame to watch.
- Apply a color correction or something, it makes it look alot nicer.
- Don't use the effect at 0:55

Other than that, I like seeing someone being creative. Keep it up. ^^  

You're lucky im too lazy to log onto youtube, and disslike it.....  

DeZey wrote:

You're lucky im too lazy to log onto youtube, and disslike it.....

instant log in ftw.
i'd dislike 100x if i could,but i can't. so just 1 dislike for u :3  

i could give u a fake like too,u would feel better?  

i could give u a fake like too,u would feel better?