Ok. Am not going to be rude, because I know how much time it costs to make a montage. Now here are a few tips:
- remove the filter, or replace it with a slight color correction
- try to make some streaks, rather than just 1/2 kills
- WolfHunt isn't very interesting to watch
Now, the quality and the music are okay.
Most of these things will get better by time. Make some more montages, get a bit of experience and I'm sure you'll be alot better. Tis a good start.