The golem and slime hint was okay.
The tree was less than ideal, but still worked.
The first was horrendous.
As for advice to make it better. After being found, move EVERY time.
Try to find more notable of a location. Doesn't have to be something major like the airship northwest of Raden.
But, something unique in the world.
Like the ruins in the tempest fields.
The hint could have been. I think a Tempest destroyed these buildings.
There are ruins all over the place but throwing in Tempest is the hint as to where the ruins are.
I know mines not perfect either, but i feel it's a step in the right direction from what it was.
I'm sorry, I don't mean to insult, I just feel it could have been thought out a little bit more.
Perhaps you need to pick GS's and ask them for a little bit of help.
I actually enjoyed the event, just felt that I should comment for future improvement upon the event.