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FionaRankin

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PostedSep 19, 2012 4:09 pm
ty very much im hopeless at poetry though lol just thought i'd give it a bash while waiting on the servers to come up
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Mellijor

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PostedSep 19, 2012 5:10 pm
PigIer wrote:
Fiona, very nice, I like it ;D

Mellijor, y u always post
lurk like a little ghost
but never write a poem
or just don't wanna show 'em?

(hint: that means you should enter <3)  


I love Poem too Razz but dunno how to make 1 Very Happy

Natalya.Hyuga

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PostedSep 19, 2012 7:21 pm

@^@

@^@
Mellijor wrote:
Interesting that u able do poems like that in very quick time...giving thots and memory to able to write a good poem like that consider it was given a short of time... i love to write inspiration poems and love song... just been amaze for what have u ryt Razz  




well in my domain i did a lot of things like this and not only poems texts etc during high school in a short amount of time and now at university it only increased ..so for me it's something normal ..if i have the knowledge i can put it into a poem or story ^_^ and ty 4 ur words ..already like talking with u Very Happy

P.s: in 2 hr i will go to university ^_^

PigIer

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PostedSep 20, 2012 12:51 pm
It's real easy, just follow the beat
surely you can make it neat
write a verse, write a line
your time to shine Very Happy

Qxygen

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PostedSep 20, 2012 1:31 pm
Oh how I'd love to win one of your prizes,
but I suck at rhyming,
so don't expect any surprises


The servers are down,
leaving me with a frown -
how long will they be?
We'll just wait and see...
I was shocked when I saw,
when I got home at 4:00,
that an update was ready,
the server merge - steady.
I can't think of much else,
so for a little suspense,
I will simply conclude;





I give up sorry, I really can't rhyme...

PigIer

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PostedSep 20, 2012 1:42 pm
hahaha, made me laugh, I like it Very Happy

3 entries so far - 12 more (or more, of course) and it's finished Very Happy

I apologize if I miscounted...if you posted it here, it counts, so no worries.

PigIer

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PostedSep 22, 2012 5:34 pm
Updated with ''entries so far''.

BUMP Smile

PigIer

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PostedSep 23, 2012 2:52 pm
Enamored to the highest point or degree
pulled out of personal debris
by the slight sight of her face
enchanted by her vigorous grace

Eye contact makes me dazzle about
she lets all the ambiance come out
the great, the okay and the no good
all set in the befitting mood

As I see her walking down the corridor
I see what my woe is for
with her, no one can measure
just the sight, an abundant pleasure

Indeed, by a Cupid struck
hoping, now, for Lady Luck
and for another amorous gaze
from the girl I hope to amaze

-just for a lil' bump, so it's not always the same monotone bump Very Happy-

Natalya.Hyuga

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PostedSep 24, 2012 2:15 pm   Last edited by Natalya.Hyuga on Sep 29, 2012 7:11 pm. Edited 1 time in total
>.<

PigIer

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PostedSep 28, 2012 10:56 pm
COME ON, MORE ENTIRES PL0X C:

(yes, I'm still waiting Very Happy)

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