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PostedSep 07, 2012 12:17 pm   Last edited by PigIer on Oct 27, 2012 4:46 pm. Edited 6 times in total

Poetry competition

:megusta:
Here's a little poem competition
for fun and forum recognition
you might be cool and be the main
while you bathe in your poem's fame

The rules are few, but they still exist
so here's my humble little list;

I like grammar, and I like it right,
it's just easier to read, not just me being uptight
being original is the key
stealing, I won't let it be
I like old myths and fiction
something beyond prediction
that's pretty much all you need to know
now write, young one, go!

Oh, I almost forgot
for a prize, what do I got?
Check out the picture below
and enjoy the show Smile



P.S.: I should mention I love rhymes and dislike most poems that don't rhyme. I will pick one winner, only one - after at least 15 entries. Good luck Very Happy

Down below, entries so far - I will update this when I have time, so no worries if I didn't include you instantly. Remember, you MUST post your entry in this topic for it to be valid!

ENTRIES SO FAR



Natalya.Hyuga

When i look at you,i slightly remember
The love that the moon goddess,Artemis surrender
For her beloved Endymion.
Shining on a world of more then two,
The cruel Zeus becamed suspicion
And in his cruelty he decided to remove the earthly temptation
And called Endymion and put him choose
Between two choices that will keep him away
For the moon goddess's love
And between the death and everlasting youth in a perpetual dreamy sleep,
He choosed the latter
Leaving the moon goddess with her broken heart and deep sadness
Whiile she visited his sleeping body and kissing him every night.


FionaRankin

when it's dark and cold
we can all be so bold
when theres fire and light
are we able to find the might
are we fallen angel or guttering flame
what is our path that will lead us to fame

are we chosen to be here
or de we have no choice
which is to be spoken?
who is our voice?
shall we be heard?
amongst all the others
or shall we just be one of the lost?
our fallen brothers?

share a thought and take few
you have a choice to remember one or two

Qxygen

Oh how I'd love to win one of your prizes,
but I suck at rhyming,
so don't expect any surprises

The servers are down,
leaving me with a frown -
how long will they be?
We'll just wait and see...
I was shocked when I saw,
when I got home at 4:00,
that an update was ready,
the server merge - steady.
I can't think of much else,
so for a little suspense,
I will simply conclude;

-le wild picture Ka..Me...Ha...Me...To be continued...


nganitup



Love is grand, love is proud
Love is the reason I wanted to ask you out
Love is sweet, love is bitter
Love is the reason I want us together
Love has no end nor a beginning
Loving you is the only thing I've been thinking
Love is sweet, love is grand
Love is the reason we'll be together till the very end



SuperDuperDude


Trick or Treat.
Smell my feet.
Goblin boos and ghosts.
Never scared me I sometimes boast.

Trick or treat.
Give me something good to eat.
Lots of yummy candy.
Rawred out happy Mandy.

Trick or treat.
That was neat.
Screams from sad Mary.
Oh no this is so scary.

All the sweet heaths.
And now the pain in my teeth.
Oh no! where shall we meet.
At the dentist on Elm Street!





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Mellijor

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PostedSep 07, 2012 3:52 pm

Re: Poem competition

:megusta:
PigIer wrote:
Here's a little poem competition
for fun and forum recognition
you might be cool and be the main
while you bathe in your poem's fame

The rules are few, but they still exist
so here's my humble little list;

I like grammar, and I like it right,
it's just easier to read, not just me being uptight
being original is the key
stealing, I won't let it be
I like old myths and fiction
something beyond prediction
that's pretty much all you need to know
now write, young one, go!

Oh, I almost forgot
for a prize, what do I got?
Check out the picture below
and enjoy the show Smile



P.S.: I should mention I love rhymes and dislike most poems that don't rhyme. I will pick one winner, only one - after at least 15 entries. Good luck Very Happy  



Hmmm nice Very Happy put some OP too Razz

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PostedSep 07, 2012 3:53 pm
I would, since I've quit a long time ago and wanna give stuff out, but I don't have them. The Justia should make up for some OPs.

PigIer

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PostedSep 09, 2012 2:34 pm
Cmon, guys!

Feed my brain, post something D:

PigIer

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PostedSep 10, 2012 2:40 pm
I AM DISAPPOINT

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PostedSep 11, 2012 9:45 pm
Roses are red
Bacon is too
Poems are hard
Bacon.

Prize plox.


On a more serious note, I would enter this, but I totally suck at creating rhyming poems O.o

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PostedSep 11, 2012 10:52 pm
Doesn't hurt to try, I don't (usually) bite Very Happy

Natalya.Hyuga

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PostedSep 17, 2012 8:19 pm

^_^

i will try but pls dont laugh QQ
This is kind of embarrassing and lack of imagination i know but i will try :

When i look at you,i slightly remember
The love that the moon goddess,Artemis surrender
For her beloved Endymion.
Shining on a world of more then two,
The cruel Zeus becamed suspicion
And in his cruelty he decided to remove the earthly temptation
And called Endymion and put him choose
Between two choices that will keep him away
For the moon goddess's love
And between the death and everlasting youth in a perpetual dreamy sleep,
He choosed the latter
Leaving the moon goddess with her broken heart and deep sadness
Whiile she visited his sleeping body and kissing him every night.




Ok i tryied,i know its weird and not even counting but ..that's where my imagion took me mind too right now ^^[no talent i know QQ ]

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PostedSep 17, 2012 10:01 pm
nice try Very Happy

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PostedSep 17, 2012 10:55 pm
Ohmygod, an entry <3 I was just about to give up.

Great, sir/ma'am, a perfectly legit entry. I like it Very Happy

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