The intro was nice, making me think that you actually had some compositing skills. But as the video went on, it made me think you were just using presets or just a quick way of getting the job done. Please avoid using presets. Adjust it in your own way. The best thing about compositing is that it's your style that you're putting into the video. Take time, and work on it. Don't rush, because nobody likes a rushing editor. Also work on the font you had in the beginning. It just didn't go with what was going on. The reason typography exists is because every font has it's own special appeal towards the human eyes. Choose a font that would go with it, and I'll assure you, it'll look 110% much more epic. Keep working and learn from mistakes. I'm not saying I'm the best, because I'm currently a student. But these are also the mistakes I went through. Good luck in the future.