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PostedAug 07, 2012 9:56 pm   Last edited by minicent12 on Aug 17, 2012 8:04 pm. Edited 1 time in total

Mech Story

Account Name: minicent12
In Game Name: HinoMi
Monster Pictures:
Master Wizard(Wind-Up Wizard)

Nkima

Standby
Sword Slasher

Artillery Tiger

Golem

Emerald Guardian

Location Pictures:


Title: The Failure of a Wizard and Thief

In a totally different planet and time, two creatures are trying to figure out how to travel through space. In Mr. Wizard’s tree house something big and wondrous is going to take place.

“You sure this is a good idea?” asked Nkima who was nervous about the whole thing about teleporting. “Of course it’s great after all I’m a wizard,” said Master Wizard. “Now just a few more adjustments…Ha we’re done!”

Master Wizard draws a circle on the ground and steps into it and grabs Nkima into the circle also. “Now take a deep breath and close your eyes and we’re off!” Everything is quite and still. After a few seconds Nkima opens his eyes and breaks into a huge laughter “Hahahahaha!! We didn’t even haha move an inch!” Master Wizard opens his eyes and looks around to see himself still standing in his tree house. “You messed up the process! You monk!! You opened your eyes too fast, you have to wait awhile!”

“Now let’s try again….take a deep breath and close your eyes and we’re off!” They waited a few minutes and slowly everything started to dissolve when Nkima took a small peek and everything went back to normal. Master Wizard had felt the room dissolve when suddenly it stopped. He opened his eyes to see Nkima’s eyes still closed. Master Wizard punched Nkima across the face and yelled at Nkima “YOU JERK! What did I tell you!”? Nkima rubs his face “I…I…just wanted to see….if it was done” Nkima slowly getting tinier as Master’s anger grew. “This is the last time I’ll let you come…after that no more excuses!”

“Now take a deep breath….”but then suddenly out of nowhere a loud noise burst into the air ‘ffppprrrrrrrrr’ then followed by a terrible stink bomb. Master Wizard coughed and politely said, “Excuse my gas….” Nkima could not hold his laugh roaring out of his mouth. “Ppphahahaha!!!” Master Wizard clears his throat and glares at Nkima to indicate that he was provoking his patience. Nkima straightens up when he feels a glare piercing his heart.

Master clears his throat one more time and begins again with the phrase “Take a deep breath and close your eyes and we’re off!” They waited a few minutes and slowly everything started to dissolve again. The two of them enter into a foggy and mystical place. Master opens his eyes first to see a place filled with a misty fog and shady trees but in the front he sees a shining door. On the other hand Nkima opens his eyes slowly to see his Master missing from his side. Nkima looks around franticly and cries, “I’m doomed! I’m in the middle of…of…nowhere!”

Then a voice comes to him “Stop crying nonsense, the journey haven’t even started yet.” Master Wizard opens the door and enters Monster Paradise. Looks back at Nkima who’s still banging his head against a tree “Aren’t you coming?” Nkima blinks in his direction, opens his mouth in awe of the big paradise before him. “Yea….” Nkima still in a daze of awesomeness.

They both step into the beautiful paradise filled with amazing monster they have never seen before but not realizing that there is nothing underneath their feet to support them up. After coming to realize that they were falling down the sky, Master Wizard frantically started saying spells that summoned a sword slasher or an artillery tiger. Then both of them tried to attack Nkima because of his juicy appearance. Nkima screamed, “We’re going to die Master do something useful!!” Before Master could summon another monster, an Emerald Guardian swooped them up and carefully placed them on the ground.

Master got up to his feet to see a bunch of golems staring at them. The enormous robot landed with a thump next to the golems. Nkima scurried to his feet and stood next to Master Wizard, whispering, “What are these green things?” Master Wizard just stared at them with fear.

Finally he replied to them “Well..Uh..thank you for your kindness.” Just as Master and Nkima was turning to leave the golems whispered to each other and said something in their language, that sounded like “beep beep boop beep” Then they grabbed Nkima and Master and tied them to a bamboo tree. They made a fire and started dancing around them. Nkima whispered to Master “I have feeling we are going to be their dinner tonight”. The End.

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PostedAug 10, 2012 1:20 pm
Minicent12, you are going to have to redo your entry. It only has two mechs and the rules say it has to be themed monsters. I let it slide the first round just to see how the turnout was and one monster that doesn't go with the theme is fine, but >_< Please write a story about mechs.

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PostedAug 12, 2012 10:20 am   Last edited by 90rdonbleu on Aug 16, 2012 10:29 am. Edited 3 times in total
Week 2 entry: Mechs

In-game name: Caelifer

Characters:
Paladin

Gigantes

Gigas


Location:
New Howlfang (some time before it was sacked)


Story:

“Oh goddess, they’re here.”

The old man pressed himself up against the back wall, as far from the wooden door as he could manage. One of the benches lay on its side, tools scattered across the stone floor of the workshop. His face had paled noticeably over the last minute, when the alarms outside had sounded. This man was simply known to everyone as the Builder. He was the town’s architect, carpenter, and mason. He was also the Paladin’s creator.

The Paladin stood watching him for a minute before turning to the doorway, sword already drawn. His sensors were beginning to pick up movement in the hallway beyond- to get this far past the defenses meant that the intruders were formidable indeed.

The door burst open suddenly, splinters spraying across the floor. A white golem stepped into the room, a single eye glowing red in the middle of its face. A set of painted eyes adorned its armor; mere decorations to evoke fear. It had a stubby reptilian tail and carried a heavy steel club over its shoulder. Two others like it followed, their own weapons held ready.

Gigantes-class golems. Creations built to intimidate and destroy. Over the years the Builder had made many enemies. Rival builders were not unheard of, though their efforts had never gotten this far before. The eye of the first golem scanned the workshop until it settled on the Paladin.

Then the trio exploded into action.

The first golem charged forward, steel club held above its head with both hands. The Paladin settled into a combat stance, then he was across the room and upon the attackers in an instant. His sword sliced across the frontrunner’s exposed torso, sparks erupting from the blade as it carved a path through the thick armor. The upper half of the construct fell limp, and the Paladin twisted around and gave it a jarring kick, sending the body sailing across the room toward another of the intruders. The golem just managed to sidestep in time, and the disabled construct crunched against the far wall in a crumpled heap.

The two remaining white golems came at him now, steel clubs swinging together in a tandem attack. The Paladin ducked under the metal, skidding on his knees and coming up behind them. He raised his blade skyward, and a mechanism in his shoulder quietly clicked.

“Radiant light!”

Both constructs turned just as blinding yellow light erupted from the Paladin’s armor, courtesy of many cleverly hidden electric lights. The golems shielded their eyes, giving the Paladin an opening. He spun between them, slamming the pommel of his sword into the face one of the golems, causing it to stumble a few steps back. He swung his other arm back in a wide arc, catching the second golem across the neck with his forearm. As it fell, he raised his sword and drove it point-first through the golem’s face.

His sensors picked up a sudden movement over his shoulder. The Paladin leapt away and just managed to dodge the club that came crashing down onto the stone floor, sending up chips of stone. The golem which had taken the pommel to the face had recovered, and had just given away its advantage.

The Paladin barged his shoulder into the golem, sending it reeling backward. He held out an arm, palm facing toward the stumbling construct. There was a whirring sound, followed by another soft click as a hidden mechanism in his arm triggered.

“Holy arrow!”

The outstretched hand suddenly slid back to reveal a small cannon built into the Paladin’s arm. There was a bang and the smell of gunpowder as a rocket propelled itself into the golem’s face. The explosion that followed shook the room, causing loose dust to fall from the rafters. When the smoke cleared, the golem lay in scattered pieces on the ground.

The Paladin paused and surveyed the room. The first golem lay in a heap in the corner, motor functions disabled with the aimed slash. The second golem was sprawled on the ground with a sword-shaped hole through its head, where the components required for the unit to function were stored. The third golem was now in six different parts of the room.

Threat: neutralized.

The Paladin returned to the old man, who had buried his face in his lap. He looked up as the Paladin approached.

“Paladin,” the Builder said shakily as he looked around the workshop. “Wha… what happened?”

“Gigantes-class golems were sent to destroy us,” the Paladin explained, offering the old man a hand. “I have repaid them in kind.”

“But how could mere Gigantes make it so far into the base on their…” The Builder began as the alarms sounded again, and a voice over the early-warning system came on.

[Warning, class 5 entity approaching. Warning, class 5...]

The far wall exploded, sending chunks of rock into the room. A large hulking figure stepped through the gap into the workshop, the stone cracking under its feet as it strode. It was much like the previous golems, only this Gigantes was six times larger and carried a steel club the width of an Oak tree.

“Oh,” the Builder breathed, disbelief in his voice as he backed up against the wall again. “Oh dear.”

The beast let loose a mechanical roar as it swung its massive weapon straight for the old man.

“No!” the Paladin leapt to the Builder’s aid, sword held before him in a parrying position; although how he would parry such a massive force he could not comprehend. The heavy club smashed into his sword and the blade shattered, spraying bits of steel. The Paladin could only watch as the massive weapon engulfed his vision…

... and then the world went dark.

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Note: I hope that having non-themed characters in supporting roles would not be violating any rules. All featured characters in the story are now mechs, just to be safe. Originally, I had written for the Paladin to be facing demons during the destruction of New Howlfang instead, but this works just as well.

The term 'Golem' is also used loosely in this context to describe an automaton, not necessarily the Golem monster depicted in the game.

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PostedAug 14, 2012 12:13 pm
Reserved for my demon theme story Smile

<center><br> Journey before Destination</center>

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PostedAug 17, 2012 8:06 pm

HI

How about now is it okay iDerz?
Just one non-themed is okay right?

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PostedAug 17, 2012 8:15 pm

Re: HI

minicent12 wrote:
How about now is it okay iDerz?
Just one non-themed is okay right?  


Yes! It is fine Smile Just one is good >_< Thank you for fixing it ^_^ It's okay now!

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PostedAug 20, 2012 1:37 am
iDerz wrote:
Need pictures please Razz And it doesn't matter if its fictional or real. XD  


I'm don't have access to a device I can use to do that, so you'll just have to let it slide and pretend my pic is somewhere in there.

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PostedSep 12, 2012 8:37 pm

Three Friends

Story
Name:CromoChaos
In-Game:CromoChaos

Golem:Clay

[img]<img src= "Golem.png">[/img]


Water Golem:Bay

[img]<img src= "Water.png">[/img]


Fire Golem:Flint

[img]<img src= "Fire.png">[/img]


Imp Captain:Zeth

[img]<img src= "Imp.png">[/img]


Imp:Billy and Neill

[img]<img src= "ImpC.png">[/img]

New Howlfang(Before Attack): Lonely Highway

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In a world, where monsters and humans can both co-exist, lived a group of three golems, Clay , the wind golem, Bay, the water golem, and Flint, the fire golem, each. They all lived in New Howlfang, on the outskirts, in the lonely highway. The lonely highway was just a road that passed through a green pasture and through the mountains though contrary to the name, there was plenty of monsters living there.
One day, they all decided to go out and play but in a secret way, Flint and Bay had a rivality with each other, and they were always competing. Clay loved hanging out with both but he just wished some that they settled their differences and forget all about their rivality.
“I bet I’m better than you Bay, I. can beat you in a race from this rock to that tree.”, said Flint. “You’re on Flint but don’t cry when I beat you.”, said Bay. “Guys take it easy, we are out here to have a nice time, enjoy.”, said Clay but the both ignored him and took off. They both dashed to the tree as fast as they could, none of them was winning, and at the end, they both ended up in a tie. “I won”, “No I won”, argued Flint and Bay. By now, Clay had arrived and they both asked for his opinion. “Tell him I won.” said Bay, “Tell him I was way faster than him.”, said Flint. “I don’t know guys but you should forget about it, for me, both of you are winners.”, said Clay.
Flint and Bay kept arguing with each other until they came up with another competition. “Whoever climbs the tree first will be the best golem”, said Bay. “You’re on”, said Flint. “Guys stop it, we shouldn’t be competing to see who is the best, we should be having a good time, like regular friends do.”, said Clay but yet again, they ignored him. “Go”, said Flint and they both dashed up the tree. They both used all of their force to climb up but neither could reach the top, they both fell back down hallways there. This went on for about half an hour until they both quitted. “I definitely climbed more than you did.”, said Flint. “You’re crazy, I was the one to climb the highest overall.”, said Bay. Again, they both started arguing with each other. “Guys come on, it hurts me to see two friends fight, especially my closest ones.”, said Clay, but yet again, he got ignored.
“There’s only one way to settle this, with a fight!”, and as Flint said that he attacked Bay. They both started bashing and punching each other in a very aggressive way. Clay tried to stop them both, but they wouldn’t listen to him and sometimes, they would even land hits very close to him. This went on for about an hour, and after that, they were both tired. “Are you ready to give up”, said Bay. “No way”, said Flint. As they were both tired and discussing, three figures suddenly appeared and attacked them both.
It was Zeth, the imp captain with Bill and Neill, the imps. They were both well known bandits that took all of some ones possessions and beat monsters up until they couldn’t move anymore. “Give us everything you got and we will have mercy”, said Zeth with Billy and Neill laughing in the background. “You will never get anything out of me” said Flint. “Me neither”, said Bay. They both knew that they weren’t in a position to fight back, because they were tired, but they weren’t going to give up that easily. “You’re choice”, and as Zeth said that he went for an attack. From the back of the tree, Clay jumped out and protected Flint and Bay with his body. Clay ended up laying in the floor, unconscious.
Flint and bay were both shocked at what Clay had done, even after they both had ignored him. “Well, what a shame, he could have saved himself but oh well. Billy, Neill, go and take his possession it take care of these two”, said Zeth. Something happened to Flint and Bay, a power emerged from within them, they were mad, mad for fighting and for what they had done to Clay. They both stood up and looked at each other, they nodded, and gave a ferocious look to Zeth. “You guys think you can take me one, fine, but you are both heading for your own demises.”, said Zeth.
Flint and Bay started heading for Zeth and as they did they both yelled “For Clay!”. They both engaged in battle with Zeth. Zeth had trouble handling them both because for the first time, they were both working together. They fought for about ten minutes and then, Zeth said, “I can’t believe you guys gave this much of a fight.” Zeth was to tired already to fight back. Then, after trying to evade all of their attacks, he got finished by a double punch, one from Flint and the other one from Bay.
Zeth fell to the floor. Billy and Neill were both scared to even attack, but they knew the escape plan already. They dashed for Zeth and carried him away. After that, Bay and Flint dashed for Clay, to see if he was alright. They moved Clay, desperately for an answer out of their fallen friend. Clay slowly opened his eyes and said to them in a faint tone, “Hey guys”. They were both glad that their friend was alright but they still took him home in order for him to recuperate. This was the day when Flint and Bay learned to be friends with each other, with a little friendly competition now and then, and care for the friends that they had.

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PostedSep 12, 2012 8:37 pm

I need help

How do i repost but with pictures
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