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f4ctfinder

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PostedJul 23, 2012 2:53 am

just a draft

I died today.
There's still a long way.
I want to stay.
Tommorrow, or another day?
no. its okay.
i want to stay today.

Because, hey. there's no more hope.
i kept climbing up the slope,
kept walking on a tightrope.
all in the hope of moving forward,
towards? nope, i died today.

i dont want to walk anymore.
my feet, knees are sore.
there's nothing there.
so what is this walking for?
yes. i died today. i say.

hey. i love you.
is it true?
that you're real.
that love, you want to feel?
sadness, you want to heal?
it's too late.
but i dont hate,
my fate.
wait, i died today.
so why am i still here?
then. come with me dear.

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f4ctfinder

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PostedJul 23, 2012 7:42 pm

going to be my last one for a while

My thoughts too deep, i cant sleep. I cried, cause i hate myself, i'm alone, there's no help. No more Light, i can't see where i'm going. So i stop pretending, no more crying, i'm hurt, but where are you?
Did you leave me too? If only i knew, i would've lied to my heart. Fool myself from the start. But hey, i still love you. i'm waiting for you. I just need a reason to breath, to be on my feet. I found it in you. But where are you? I'm still waiting for you.

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f4ctfinder

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PostedJul 30, 2012 12:37 am
I fell asleep, lulled by the monotonous drop of rain, i sank deep into a dream. A dream wherein i care for nothing, floating in the sea, eyes fixated in the sky flashing with strobes of sugar stars and sweetened by the gentle lapping of the waves. Entranced, a tear escaped my heart. I clasped my hands together, fingers entwined, eyes closed, I willed myself not to cry, not to spill a speck of sadness in this sanctuary, the place, the moment that I treasure most. I smiled, contented, in this place wherein the World doesn't care for me, and I, not caring for the World. I smile, assured, in this time wherein the Past, the Future doesn't matter, only the Present waiting for me. And, as if trusting God that He granted my wish, I opened my eyes. Only to see that the World, that the God I dreamed of, betrayed me.

Sighing, tears flowed through my cheeks, as monotonous as the rain below the sky.

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f4ctfinder

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PostedJul 30, 2012 8:18 pm
The cat said nyan nyan

with pleading eyes and purring,

she jumped to my lap.



Yes. My first ever Haiku I made XD

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PostedAug 13, 2012 8:27 pm
I was very bored

So I decided to write

I made a haiku.

I obviously lack the restraint of Anchaai. Now the world can see how terrible an on the spot haiku can be.

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f4ctfinder

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PostedAug 14, 2012 8:42 pm
KurysFlame wrote:
I was very bored

So I decided to write

I made a haiku.

I obviously lack the restraint of Anchaai. Now the world can see how terrible an on the spot haiku can be.  


no XD it took me half an hour to make one, and it's still terrible.

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f4ctfinder

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PostedAug 14, 2012 8:43 pm

Curiosity

Thump.

I turned my head to the direction of the sound.

Thump.

It's there, in the abandoned storage room.

Thump.

Curiosity defeated fear. I stepped, listened closer. closer.

THUMP.

The decaying door, illuminated by the moon's light intensified the sound, the fear.

THUMP.

Beads of sweat formed in my forehead, flowed to my chin. I gulped. Slowly, steadily shaking, i placed my ear nearer the door's surface. I listened.

THUMP. THUMP. THUMP. THUMP.

With every beat of the sound, my heart responded in sync, it trembled louder.

THUMP.

Uncertain, but fear compelling me, I opened the door. I winced as the hinges creaked. Standing still, I stopped, then waited.

THUMP.

Light flooded the inside of the room.

THUMP.

Unable to move. Paralyzed, "I shouldn't have went too far." my mind was racing.

THUMP-- THUMP--- THUMP------------------. . . . . . . . . . . . .

The sound stopped. My curiosity finally snapped. I took a peek.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

There, in the floor, a girl in tattered clothes thrashed about, silently like a shadow. Her face, covered by her disheveled hair turned to me. Bloodshot eyes.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ............ THUMP

The door creaked closed.


- made this one... weeks ago xD only forgot to post it here though.

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Sakura10Sands

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PostedSep 17, 2012 7:47 pm
great poetry :3

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