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f4ctfinder

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PostedJul 01, 2012 2:02 am

I was bored so...

i made a very short story, or poem w/e
She cried quietly.

Tears streaming down her cheek efforlessly.

Her hand numb from gripping the spoon,

the stew gone cold, mixing with the tears.

Biting her lips, she tastes blood.

Her heart shatters as she hears broken glass.

Her emotion falters as she hears shouts and curses, pleads and promises.

I wish i wasn't born in this world, in this family. She raged in her thoughts.

"If it were'nt for that girl!" Her dad retorted, pointing a finger, spitting saliva.

Her mother retorts comforting words, promises that were soon to be broken. Bowing, kissing the dirty feet of her father.

And, the girl, struggling to hold back the emotion, seeing her mother in such state

threw the spoon,

the plates, the cake, the candle

ripped the gifts,

blames God, blames her parents, blames the world, blames herself for being alive, blames everyone.

"Just please stop it. Please." She whispered, her heart shouted.

She cried in the corner,

she cried herself to sleep,

she cried in her dream,

until now, she cries in her heart,

as she nears her birthday.



Nothing much LOL, got bored while waiting to download something while reinstalling GF.
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ceirinthe1

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PostedJul 01, 2012 11:45 am

Re: I was bored so...

i made a very short story, or poem w/e
f4ctfinder wrote:
She cried quietly.

Tears streaming down her cheek efforlessly.

Her hand numb from gripping the spoon,

the stew gone cold, mixing with the tears.

Biting her lips, she tastes blood.

Her heart shatters as she hears broken glass.

Her emotion falters as she hears shouts and curses, pleads and promises.

I wish i wasn't born in this world, in this family. She raged in her thoughts.

"If it were'nt for that girl!" Her dad retorted, pointing a finger, spitting saliva.

Her mother retorts comforting words, promises that were soon to be broken. Bowing, kissing the dirty feet of her father.

And, the girl, struggling to hold back the emotion, seeing her mother in such state

threw the spoon,

the plates, the cake, the candle

ripped the gifts,

blames God, blames her parents, blames the world, blames herself for being alive, blames everyone.

"Just please stop it. Please." She whispered, her heart shouted.

She cried in the corner,

she cried herself to sleep,

she cried in her dream,

until now, she cries in her heart,

as she nears her birthday.



Nothing much LOL, got bored while waiting to download something while reinstalling GF.  


that was buetifull, emotional and dare i say prety well representative of love you have a talent miss

f4ctfinder

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PostedJul 02, 2012 7:53 pm

xD

lol thanks for the praise

and i made another poem, it's based from what happened to me earlier lol, so yes it's a true story



Umbrella tops,
water drops,
no sunshine pie,
all cloudy sky.
Sigh, i dont want to go to school.

Wears blue coat,
Drinks Coke float,
passes a flooded street,
soaky feet.
wait, did i just see a boat?

There, i see my school.
**** i forgot my ID.
Whatever, let's just be sneaky.
Ha! Stupid guard, piece of cake!
LOL so happy i'm not late.

Walking, my umbrella played,
swinging,
flipping,
turning,
dancing,
all the while i was singing,
"Rain, rain go away come again another..."
Hey.
LOL what. I've got no classes today? -facepalm-


I suggest the book "The D-Minus Poems of Jeremy Bloom" if you're a fan of dumb nonsense poems xD

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PostedJul 04, 2012 7:14 pm

Another entry :D

I walked,
shoulders burdened,
weak kneed,
weary eyes,
staring to tommorow.

hopeless,
despaired,
loveless,
i gave up.
i seek, i pondered
i asked, i answered

what
I dont know.

why
because i'm lost

where
in life

how
for i hated

who
myself, for being alive.


Only too late i realized
that Breathing is the problem,
Sleep is a solution,
and Death is the answer.

thus i walked,
head bowed,
heart faded,
emotions lying,
not looking for tommorow.

ceirinthe1

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PostedJul 07, 2012 10:49 pm

again cool

u realy got a talent keep on it. i wish i could make stuff like that Sad

f4ctfinder

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PostedJul 09, 2012 5:47 am

Re: again cool

ceirinthe1 wrote:
u realy got a talent keep on it. i wish i could make stuff like that Sad  


thanks xD, to be honest anyone can make their own work, they just need inspiration and the time to do so. and yes, i'd be posting more here if ever i get the chance to make another one.

MyAnimeList(outdated) Quill/7x/DMN/4x/RNGR/ 'What happens to a dream deferred?'

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PostedJul 09, 2012 6:07 am
*tries to not post a poem*

It's pretty good, but it's long. I'm seriously trying to avoid posting poems here tho.

f4ctfinder

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PostedJul 12, 2012 3:19 am
Anchaai wrote:
*tries to not post a poem*

It's pretty good, but it's long. I'm seriously trying to avoid posting poems here tho.  


I dont mind you guys posting here xD actually its better if you did.

MyAnimeList(outdated) Quill/7x/DMN/4x/RNGR/ 'What happens to a dream deferred?'

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PostedJul 13, 2012 2:31 am

i was eating footlong hotdog on the rooftop, drinking Coke.

then this happened. xD
A shout of fear pierced the evening silence. Lucia turned around to its direction. She saw nothing. Darkness swallowed the trees, the posts, the house, the road, the sky, leaving only dark eerie silhouettes.

Her heart pounding, knees wavering, palms sweating, she mustered all her courage to move, to walk towards nowhere. Seconds pass, minutes, then more minutes, her jog turned into a run, her run turned into panic, and panic became confusion, despair. She stopped, calming herself, she breathed steadily. But the fear is too much.


"Where am I? Is anyone here?" She shouted in frustration, hoping to get an answer. Nothing came, only the silent whispers of the night. A chill ran through her back. She heard dry leaves crack, branches snap. Something, someone was approaching. The footstep draws nearer, slowly but surely, its heading towards her. Near enough for her to hear its heavy, rough, deep breathing.

Ten seconds counting, nine, eight... five, then silence followed. She closed her eyes shut, bit her lip tightly, teeth clenched, she forced herself not to cry. Suddenly, a cold, slimy liquid dripped to her forehead, flowed to her eyelids, nose, cheeks, to her lips, to her neck.

She lifted her hands, shaking, she reached to touch her face. She opened her eyes to see blood. Her hand was dripping with blood, her hair, her shirt, her jeans, everything. She looked around, the sky, the ground, the darkness, all in crimson red.

She was screaming, falling into the deep well of red with no sense of up from down. She gave up, hopeless, she allowed the darkness to overcome her.

Lucia sat upright, pale, sweating, shivering. She breathed calmly, "It was only a dream.", she thought, relieved. She looked at the clock. Stared at it blankly. It was 12:01am, July 13, Friday.

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PostedJul 14, 2012 6:22 am
yep seems like a black friday to me
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