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makeawave123

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PostedSep 25, 2011 8:03 am

A Bit Of Poetry...

Some sad,some happy :)/;(
Here's Some Poetry:
-The Petals of Life
Life reveals itself after the years..
Like a flower...Full of tears
We don't know when we'll die
Just please don't cry..
Mother of Nature,
Father of Life
Give us a perfect time
Here on Earth..
When we go to heaven,
It won't be life..
Hard is where life is.

-Just Another Day
Today's Just another day
More work,no more play
First we go to class
Quite a mass of class if you ask
First its Spanish,then some world study
I think it's kinda cruddy!
After that we blow things up
Then we study some words
After that there's Math
Quite a guarentee you will belive
You won't run off screaming,as math is so easy
Easy as a peasy
We then stuff our faces with lunch
Munch,munch munch our jaws Munch!
Last class of the day we sway,and run
Right to reading.
On friday the troubles end,we run home
right to play again.
(that one SUCKEDDD!)

-Love will never find me again.
I'm a broken heart,laying there
Left behind with scars
My true love found another girl
Although it wasn't true love..
I wasn't loved by anyone
Day or night or any time.
Love will never find me again
I don't Love anyone else.
I wish it was true before..
I miss him so..
He didn't love me..i crushed on him
I will never trust my life again..

So..those weren't too good. Don't sugar coat the comments,please as i know i am not good at poetry Smile
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murilotn

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PostedSep 25, 2011 8:15 am
Smile

Mikagee

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PostedJul 25, 2012 6:38 pm
Nice one Surprised ..
Good jb -^^-

Noesii

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PostedJul 26, 2012 12:32 am
I really like the first one ^^

Next two weren't as good. Kiu :3

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