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AvengerUchiha45

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PostedJun 02, 2011 3:31 pm

HeartBreak Through Death-1

Love/Death Story
This is different from what i would normally write as most of you know me for my ShaMing stories and upcoming Siggy maker as i get some new request everyday or just as the fun around kid Razz Daikako. Well my girlfriend asked me to help her with a story and i said sure since i couldnt find a way to say no lol its not completely finish yet since there is just one more part we gotta finish writing but we got finals coming up so we took a break from writing so here's the first part....
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By Harrison KoolShades Junior, and His girlfriend.

It was a dark, foggy night on the 28th of May, when a girl named Icy was running from her ex boyfriend. He was a crazy stalker who was intent on not losing her to anybody else; because of the break up they had a few weeks ago because of his drinking habits and putting his hands on her. She was seeing this other dude and they were having dinner before she heard a knock on the door, so she goes to answer it.

“Hello, who is it”

She hears not answer so she starts to turn around, when she hears the bell ring one more time. She opens the door and see’s her ex boyfriend Jonathan.

“Jonathan, what are you doing here I’m trying to have a dinner with my new boyfriend Kenny”

“I’m sorry baby, I never meant for this to happen to us I didn’t mean to hit you or drink so much that it made you leave me for this little ****” Says Jonathan

Kenny happens to hear a male voice at the door and goes to see who it is.

“Who is this guy baby?”

“I’m here boyfriend you ****, now if you may escort yourself out of her house before I must remove you”

“I’m sorry Kenny, this is my ex boyfriend Jonathan he thinks were still together he has a really bad crush on me and don’t think he will ever get over me”

“Oh I see, but dude like she said you’re her ex boyfriend and I’m here boyfriend now so I’d like if you not talk to me like I’m a little kid or something or I may just have to teach you a quick lesson”

“Please don’t start fighting Jonathan can you just leave and Kenny….”

Icy stopped talking because Jonathan placed her aside and got up in Kenny’s face and pushed him back

“So you think you’re big by challenging me to a fight now huh little man?”

“I’m just here doing what I feel is right and since your trespassing that’s what I’m going to do”

Jonathan doesn’t give Kenny’s words any consideration and just punches him in his face. Kenny falls to the ground and Jonathan gets on top of him and starts bashing his face into the floor.

“Jonathan stop, you get off of him he did nothing to you, your just a jealous punk that’s all you ever were and all you ever will be! That’s why you lose me”

Jonathan hears the worlds and gets off of Kenny and grabs Icy’s arm and throws her across the floor

“You stupid girl, you mean little to me”

In that time, Kenny takes advantage and starts to choke Jonathan who brings him to his knees, Kenny kicks him in his head and Jonathan lies on the floor knocked out

“Icy call the cops get them hear as fast as you can ill try to restrain him until then”

“Ok Kenny….KENNY WATCH OUT!!!!”

Kenny turns around but then he gets hit with a tire wrench by Jonathan. Kenny is now knocked out cold and Icy goes out the back door into the forest alone in the dead night time weather. Jonathan goes after her in hoping to kill her or torture her with his sick devilish mind.

“Aww come on icy, I love you don’t leave me we can live a very happy life together just you and me and have 2 kids”

Icy doesn’t hear anything he says as she tries to block him out because of the thoughts she now has in her head as he is ready to kill her because of the murder he just committed. Icy turns around to see that Jonathan is gaining on her and will catch her any second now. So she goes into the thick woody area with tall brownish looking tree’s, When all of a sudden she trips when she turns around she see’s Jonathan staring her in the face. He hits her and she blacks out.

Moments later Icy wakes to find herself in a white room and hears the ringing noise in her ear. She opens her eyes and really can’t see who is in the room but she hears voices.

“Icy……Icy are you ok, do you feel any better?” the nurse asked. Icy tried to sit up but the nurse puts her hand on her arm telling her to relax.

“What happen… how did I get here?”

“Well you fell and hit your head, so now you’re here but you are ok. You can leave today.
Icy sat there thinking over what had happen last night. Then her thought were interpreted by her best friend Candy.

“Girl are ok, did he hurt you?!!!”

“Candy am ok the nurse said I can go home now.”

Icy got dress filled out her papers and left with candy. In the car ride she told candy everything that she remember happening. Later that night they headed to the club to go partying. Thought out the whole night they were partying & dancing away a couple of guys came and dance with them but none really didn’t get close.

“Icy you need a new man.”

“Why you say that for?”

“Because every guy who has came though here. You have said noting to them and just let them go.”

“So they aren’t my type anyway. Don’t worry I will find him when am ready.”
As they were dancing a guy in black & purple was walking in their direction. He was bout 6ft, light skinned, had a bright white smile, and sexy hazel eyes that would make you melt if you stared into them. He got even closer to Icy, her heart started to beat faster. Then she stops dancing and looks at the guy walking toward her.

“Icy….Icy!! Are you listening to me?”

“Huh… yes I am.”

They guy got even closer to her.

“Hi my name is James.”

“Hi… Hi James my name is Icy.” Icy stood there about to melt like ice but she keep her cool.

“Cute name, would you like to dance with me?”

“Sure I would love to.” She took his hand and he walked her to a spot on the dance floor. At first Icy felt as if he has already token her heart from her but they way he dance gave her them feeling she couldn’t describe but knew to was a feeling she loved. The night seems to never end they dance all night long. Candy told Icy she was leaving but she didn’t pay no mind to her. It was about 4 in the morning. She had 3 hours until she had to get up to go to work.

“Hey you want to leave and go home?”

“Yea I would.” They walked to his car and he drove her home, while they were driving home they talked a bit.

“I had a great time with you tonight Icy, you’re a wonderful dancer”

“Well thank you you’re not that bad yourself” She giggles

“Maybe we should do this again some time?”

“Hmm, I guess me and Candy go out like every weekend to hang loose”
“Oh cool, I guess that sounds good get our groove on ha-ha”

“Yes, you know it”

Candy’s car sits in the drive way and James pulls in beside her.

“Nice place y’all got here”

“Yes thanks it took us awhile to play it off but we finally got it, and we enjoy every minute here of it”

“Sounds good to me, well I guess I’ll be seeing you around”

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PostedJun 02, 2011 3:36 pm
James writes his number down on a piece of paper and gives it to Icy. Icy gladly accepts the paper and puts it in her purse and opens her door. She puts one foot out and then turns her body and kisses James on the cheek and then gets out of the car and giggles. She gets to the front door and turns around and waves as James pulls out the drive way and flies down the main street in his Mustang.
Icy and Candy go into their rooms and change into their PJs and then they walk out of their rooms and goes into the kitchen to get some hot chocolate its silent for a second and then Candy pops the question.

“SO GIRL HOW WAS IT?!?!?”

Icy quickly lolls and then responds by saying…”What you mean girl?”

“You know what I mean, about James how he just walked into the club and just like that walked over to you and you melted in his arms girl”

“Yes I know, he is all that and a box of fruit loops”

“Oh wow girl, but how was your time? What y’all talk about on the way home? Come on girl I want the details”

Icy and Candy get there hot chocolate and then they go sit on the couch and Icy tells Candy about her night with James and what happen. They turn on Saw IIV, and get so scared they both turn the movie off and fall to sleep on the couch beside each other.

Icy and James having been going on dates for the past 2months and seem to enjoy them self’s. It’s been 2months since they met at the club that night. Candy has found herself a man who she been with for about 2-3 weeks now and is having a Superb time. Icy still has lingering memories of Kenny who Jonathan had killed. She hasn’t even heard/seen from Jonathan since that night and has no memory of what happened to him. She just shrugs it off and keeps living life day by day with James.
Candy, Icy, James, and Candy’s boyfriend are over the house playing board games when they see a luminous light from outside.

“What could that be asks Candy?”

“I can go check it out if you want me to” says James

“I think it’s better if we all go check it out”

They all go outside to wait what that luminous glow could be. A person dressed in all blacks slowly steps out the car. Icy heart starts to beat fast in her chest but as soon as she saw Candy running toward the person her heart calmed down a little.

“Icy look its Sam and her boyfriend. Remember from the third grade”

“Hey, omg Sam I haven’t seen you in years how u been?”

Icy walked over to them and gave them hugs. Then she walked them into the house. Everyone sat and started to talk. Around 11 o’clock everyone went home only ones left in the house was Icy and James.

“Icy I will be back tomorrow I’m going to stay at Jeff’s house.”

“Ok Candy sees then.”

Candy left with Jeff out the door leaving Icy and James alone. Icy went into the kitchen to get two sodas. James comes up behind her and put his arms around her, and whispers something in her ear which makes her giggle. He turns her around to face him.
“You’re so beautiful, smart, and fun to be around. You make my heart smile every time I see you and I love to hear you sweet voice.”

Icy just stares into his eyes, then smiles.” I love you James”

“I love you to Icy.”

He leans in closer to kiss her. Their lips slowly touch sending a sweet feeling down Icy’s spine. Their kiss grows even more passionate. He picked her up and carried her up the stairs to the bedroom. He placed her on the bed and sat next to her, then placed her on his lap. Icy kisses him on his cheek. He puts his hands around her & kisses down her neck as he slowly takes her shirt off. They go back and forward until each other is undress and under the sheets.

“You ready to do this?” James asked Icy as he appears on top of her.

“Yes I’m ready.” She looked him in the eyes and kissed him as he when in her.

“Ahhhh… baby I can see you never did this before you’re so tight... lol.”

“Wait …… wait baby. Be gentle please.” She looks into his eyes.

“Sure baby but you sure you want to go on with it?”

“Yes am really sure.” She bites her lip as he goes deeper into her. He keeps it up knowing Icy loves every moment of it. Icy digs her nails into his back, as he kisses all over her chest.

“Ughhhh….. Baby don’t stop. Ohhhhhhh James!!!!” Then they switched positions, now she was on top.

“Lol baby I’m going to love this.”

He said as he slapped her ***. Icy gets on top and slowly goes down on him. He grabs her hips and follows her movement then moves her a little faster on him. He groans loudly and he pounds her harder, make her moan loudly too.

“Mmmmmmmm baby it feel amazing baby, you feel so good inside of me baby.”

Icy goes up and down on him deeper and harder causing her body to feel pain but pleasure. They when on for about another hour.

“Ohhh James that feel awesome baby.”

Icy said as she lies on his chest feeling his heart beat.

“You weren’t that bad either baby I LOVE IT. Lol.”

He said giggling, he kissed her forehead. They later fell asleep together. Later that Saturday morning Candy walks into the house and headed to kitchen. She placed her car keys on the counter and goes to get a bottle of water. Icy and James was still asleep in their bed fast asleep not hearing anything in the kitchen.

“Icy! Icy are you up?”

Candy screams. Icy doesn’t respond to her so Candy headed up the stairs. She knocked on Icy’s room door but still no answer. She opened the door peaking though.

“OMG! ICY ANGLES ZTORMS”

Candy yells. Icy wakes to the sound of her voice. James falls to the floor with half of the sheets on him.

“Omg, no you didn’t Candy said standing in the middle of the doorway.
Icy looks at the floor as James had fell to the floor with half of the sheets on him and Icy covering herself with the other half.

“Oh Ms. ZTORMS you’re not getting away with this one, I want you to put some clothes on and get your butt down stairs we got some talking to do”

Icy puts on some clothes and goes downstairs while James get back in the bed and goes to sleep like nothing just happened.

“What is it girl, why you tripping?”

“Ok listen up, I understand you to been hitting it up for awhile and you’re like in love and everything having him up in our house and yall playing your little *** games and who knows what…just ain't cool Icy and then the main thing is you did it in my room…my room probably smells like hot *** and *** about now…Now I want you to get him out of here and tell him you’ll see him later.”

“B-Bu-But Candy…”

“No buts this time Icy get him out of here or I will”

Icy doesn’t try to fight back with Candy anymore and goes and tells James to get up and get out. James happened to over-hear what had went downstairs and didn’t even bother to ask why or any questions he just got dressed got his car keys and clothes and left he didn’t even give Candy a second look.

Candy and Icy had a big talk that day and Icy didn’t even talk to James for the rest of the day he tried calling but Candy had taken her phone for the day so she couldn’t talk to James, who was a bit cold but it was the way Candy operated. Icy was watching TV and saw at the Mall near here they were having a discount on these new Gucci Boots so she decides to go get them.

“Yo Candy, I saw this Ad on the news about these cute Gucci boots for 50% off Imma go get me a pair.”

“Wait picks me up a pair but in a different color from yours I don’t want to steal your fashion girl”

As Candy yells from the shower upstairs getting ready to see her man tonight.
Icy goes to the Mall and picks up her & Candy a pair of those boots and see’s the path to her car is blocked off and she must go all the way around, but the only way around would be to walk through a dark ally.

“Ugh, I don’t want to do this but I have no choice…hope nothing goes down”

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PostedJun 02, 2011 3:58 pm
Dam long story I love it dai Smile

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