Removed - due to re work

i <3 it already

:O Great short story hachey i love it myself
As taken the title of the best story maker on ts2, i gotta give you credit i really do like your story, and understand it greatly.
I say you give it a title, and keep it going this could come out to be a great story and better then my "ShaMing" stories and thats saying something if you ask me and a few others

Cya soon.

omg wow u guy have alot of time to write all this i wish i have those free time..

Thanks you guys. I appreciate it. It was basically a small story awhile back, about 4 pages. It was poorly written and I just decided to work on it a bit more. If all goes well I will post the second and third chapters, and I will start working on the 4th. I am in need of new ideas though. I will have to do some brain storming. Let me know if you think I should post the next parts.

tl;dr.

Sorry, i tried. it was good from what i read tho!

Lmao, well good try I suppose. Maybe try reading it in parts? =D

You can read some of my stories for ideas if u want I'm very creative and if u get the chance comments on them wuld help it wuld always b great

No one told dhachey to post the rest of the story yet, lol
Post the rest of the story so we can give you ideas that would not break the lore of your story

I shall post the second chapter. Thanks for your comments and feedback :3