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dhachey96

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PostedMay 16, 2011 2:54 pm   Last edited by dhachey96 on Feb 13, 2013 5:33 pm. Edited 3 times in total

Part one. A short story, so far.

Rate it, criticize it, just tell me what you think!
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rtotano

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PostedMay 23, 2011 1:15 am
i <3 it already

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PostedMay 23, 2011 2:43 pm
:O Great short story hachey i love it myself Smile
As taken the title of the best story maker on ts2, i gotta give you credit i really do like your story, and understand it greatly.
I say you give it a title, and keep it going this could come out to be a great story and better then my "ShaMing" stories and thats saying something if you ask me and a few others Smile

Cya soon.

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PostedMay 23, 2011 3:40 pm
omg wow u guy have alot of time to write all this i wish i have those free time.. Surprised

dhachey96

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PostedMay 24, 2011 2:04 pm
Thanks you guys. I appreciate it. It was basically a small story awhile back, about 4 pages. It was poorly written and I just decided to work on it a bit more. If all goes well I will post the second and third chapters, and I will start working on the 4th. I am in need of new ideas though. I will have to do some brain storming. Let me know if you think I should post the next parts.

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PostedMay 24, 2011 2:29 pm
tl;dr.

Sorry, i tried. it was good from what i read tho!

dhachey96

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PostedMay 24, 2011 2:35 pm
Lmao, well good try I suppose. Maybe try reading it in parts? =D

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PostedMay 24, 2011 5:08 pm
You can read some of my stories for ideas if u want I'm very creative Very Happy and if u get the chance comments on them wuld help it wuld always b great

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PostedMay 24, 2011 6:48 pm
No one told dhachey to post the rest of the story yet, lol
Post the rest of the story so we can give you ideas that would not break the lore of your story

dhachey96

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PostedMay 24, 2011 7:06 pm
I shall post the second chapter. Thanks for your comments and feedback :3
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