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PostedApr 22, 2011 1:02 am

Adrasteia

The crackle of fire could be heard inside of the seemingly vacant tavern. Pillars of smoke could be seen from the windows, and wisps of the fumes cast dark fingers amongst the openings of the building, worming their way through. Although the stench was faint, it made a nose wrinkle. Through the blackness of the tavern’s rafters, a pair of eyes could be seen. Dull gray eyes panned downward, watching the ground below for movement. The coast was clear.

Hushed footsteps carried them to the other side of the beam they’d been perched on; weary of the lights along the way. The silhouette of a young lady nestled there for a moment. A tail of smoke ventured through the vents and rose upward, collecting in a miniature cyclone with a lonely table as it’s center. No… That wasn’t quite right. There was someone seated in the chair before the table. Someone small, clad in red, who seemed unaffected by the presence of the smoke. Her eyes fixated upon the red figure an… Urg! The teen clutched her nose to block off the foul stench the outside fumes had brought in.

What bothered her was not the smothering scent of carbon dioxide, but the sickening smell that accompanied it.
The odor of burning human flesh.
“I tire of this game, Zuzu.” The bored, monotone voice pierced her ears like an iced dagger, breaking the veil of silence that had blanketed itself within the otherwise empty tavern. She gasped suddenly, taken aback. Her foot inched too far back and slid off of the beam, carrying with it half of her body; she bit her tongue harshly in an attempt to scream in surprise. The beam creaked with her weight. Grinting her teeth, she poured all of her strength into her arms and heaved herself up. Her heart was pounding at a mile a minute by the time she righted herself and gave a quiet sigh – mostly to help herself calm her nerves. The bored tone fanned out again. “For someone who’s trying to sneak up on me, you’re not doing a very good job.”

Suppressing a growl, the young lady pulled back into the darkness and rethought her route. The figure clad in red pushed back from their chair and climbed upon the table. The smoke cyclone picked up around them; a black and red Wu cape flapped in the wind. It was… A little girl!? Yes, a small prepubescent girl with elegantly drawn back white hair. The fur of the crimson comb feathered out in perfect unison with the long sleeves of the peach beauty. Small crimson boots barely made a sound against the cherry wood table. Her movements were comparable to a bloody fairy.

Elegant.

Graceful.

Childish.

Her looks, however, were that of a demon in child's skin.

Blood-coated clothing.

Blood-coated skin.

And an innocent smile, even though there was blood coating her teeth.
A mock laugh broke free from her lips. The young lady maneuvered quickly, going the opposite direction of her original path. “Zuzuuuu~! Come out, come out… Where ever you aaare…”The girl sing-songed. She moved swiftly, silent as a shadow, bringing her behind the small child. Oblivious to her current position, the child continued to dance as though at play. And perhaps she was… At play with the tormented souls being burned outside. The thought of it made the maiden’s stomach churn. It was now or never. A sliver of silver could be seen at her side then, gripped tightly in her hand. The hilt of her trusted eagles reflected red in her gunmetal eyes. The palm of her hand kissed the butt of the handle as she prepared for the final blow.

“You can’t hide forever!” Stopping with her back turned to the hidden lady, the little girl called out with a hint of annoyance in her voice.
She smirked, closing her eyes for a moment. This is the right thing, she told herself. You’re doing the right thing, Zu. For the good of Shu… And her people, this… The girl wasn’t a child. She wasn’t. She couldn’t allow herself to be fooled by that small form. Her grip tightened. For Shu! With a powerful shove of her feet, the maiden lunged from the rafters and towards the small girl, with the twin saber reigning down mercilessly, aiming to kill…

~O~
Writer's notes: Adrasteia is another word for "revenge".

Please do not ask me for spoilers or what this is about, or which characters are involved. If the piece receives enough replies where I feel the need, or am inspired to write another part, all questions will be answered...

In due time. :'D
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PostedApr 22, 2011 1:21 am

Amazing job!

Can't wait to read more. Two thumbs up. Smile

Wink

Noxazema

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PostedApr 22, 2011 9:28 am

Re: Amazing job!

lavarze wrote:
Can't wait to read more. Two thumbs up. Smile  

Thank you so much, Blade. :]

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PostedMay 04, 2011 9:36 pm
Omg,awesome Lego :O

The little girl or whatever-it-is is so creepy x.x
And wait to end it Very Happy you'd better add more! >.>

Noxazema

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PostedMay 04, 2011 9:40 pm
zhangxinkc wrote:
Omg,awesome Lego :O

The little girl or whatever-it-is is so creepy x.x
And wait to end it Very Happy you'd better add more! >.>  

She's supposed to be creepy~

And thank you so much for the feedback. I -may- add more.

Lord Isi had this to say: http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSGusrQAvi0FgjdueMJBPUplmOMU8ry1BLNg3pDmCjMPphdxItM&t=1

XDD

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PostedMay 09, 2011 9:23 pm
Talismans of black and gold billowed from the child’s sleeves. She turned abruptly on her heels with a deck of cards thrust forth, her hand a fraction of an inch away from the serrated edge of the saber. “Peek-a-boo!” The girl cackled. Zuzu’s eyes widened. Sh*t! A dark wind exploded from the rush of talismans, knocking the teen back into the beam head first with a loud grunt of pain. She fell with a thud, struggling to maintain consciousness. The cyclone of smoke dispersed suddenly, and hung in a thick blanket over the floor of the tavern; its putrid stench invaded the young woman’s senses, making it hard to breathe.

“Kihihihi.” The child landed perfectly on the floor on an orb of wind below her feet that vanished when she landed. Hushed footsteps guided her to the location of the still struggling, now coughing maiden. Zuzu’s grip tightened upon her sabers, using one as leverage in an attempt to sit up. Most of her face was obscured by her hair, but one bright eye was fixed upon the small girl, who looked back at her with a mocking grin. “Sha… Ru… Gen…!” she hissed. Little Sharugen cackled; it was merry and murderous, menacing and dark all at once, yet retaining some sort of innocence – perhaps from the monotone pitch of her voice. “Don’t know when to quit, do you?” she huffed, stepping on the girls’ hand. Zuzu grimaced and her cough went ragged; she was too weak to give much more resistance. The child smiled. “Rest now, little Zuzu.” She cooed, placing the same boot over the girls’ head. “You’ve done enough for today.”

Sharugen stomped the young lady’s head into the wooden floor. The last thing she heard was the bone chilling laughter of the small, bloody fairy-girl.

Induction End.
Chapter One may be coming soon to a thread near you. Stay tuned...

Author's Note: I actually typed this out like, three days ago, but I've been toggling with ideas for what happens next. What I had written... Iehhh, I don't like it, so I'm likely to redo it. However, I have one of two options:

1) Continue the current event,
or 2) start with a 1st person dialoge explaining that there's more to the story, which will resort in rewinding to the very beginning until we catch up to current events.

zhangxinkc

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PostedMay 17, 2011 11:29 pm
Legooo I love your writing =D
I can't believe I didnt see this till now x.x
But since after reading the first part, I couldn't stop wondering what would happen, and if she would be able to kill the creepy-red-girl Dx
And now yet another cliffhanger. T.T
Better update soon ! D:

Noxazema

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PostedMay 19, 2011 1:21 pm
zhangxinkc wrote:
Legooo I love your writing =D
I can't believe I didnt see this till now x.x
But since after reading the first part, I couldn't stop wondering what would happen, and if she would be able to kill the creepy-red-girl Dx
And now yet another cliffhanger. T.T
Better update soon ! D:  

^^; I wasn't even aware that someone had replied to this, much less read the last update. xD But thank you, Zhang. ^.^

Also, the creepy-red-girl's name is Sharugen. :' D
I may be obligated to write the next part soon. Who knows. I still have to figure out where I wanna go after this. xD

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PostedJun 10, 2011 2:14 pm
.::.Chapter One.::.

DARKNESS.
It would always be there no matter where she looked. Her only companion was the thick blanket of silence that settled around her, broken only by her shuddering breaths. She couldn’t remember any time in her life that had ever been so quiet that it made her ears ring; it had always been filled by the clashing of steal and the growl of a battle cry, and the shriek of horrified people going up in flames inside their own bases. Flames… Like the ones that had devoured all that she loved outside the tavern.

Useless! Her eyes pinched shut. They’d slipped away in minutes. They all screamed and died in the vat of the merciless white fire… Fire that water could not put out. There was nothing more she could have done to save them but for taking the life of their murderess, Sharugen. And I couldn’t even do that right, she sighed inwardly. She hicced as her hands began to grope about the stone floor, searching for something – anything. No matter how much her chest constricted, or her head throbbed from the loss of her soldiers, the tears would not come.

Cold fingertips brushed against some sort of incline; she scooted towards it instantly, sweeping her hands over it. A wall… Alright Zema, you can do this. Nodding, as though in reassurance, she rose on shaken legs and stumbled. She hadn’t even realized she’d been shaking the entire time. And from what? The maiden wheeled it from her mind; now was not the time to question such a trivial matter. If she felt along the wall, she might be able to find something to escape this dark chamber.

But there weren’t any.

Then perhaps I can… Her hands retreated back to her belt, where the sheath of her twin sabers were. Instead of smooth leather, her digits ran along smooth… skin? What the-
She reached behind her, for the iron spear she carried on her back. The only thing her hand touched was the hair clinging to her back, and the cool skin beneath it. Zema blinked. She pulled up a leg, searching for the lace of her boots where she tucked her wind elemented nunchuku. Yet again, all she found was skin. Her own skin. Why am I naked…? She rubbed her forearms, trying to bring her body a little heat, groaning softly. How, for the sake of all that was benevolent, was she going to get out of this one?

The girl continued to rub her arms, almost feverishly. She could feel the goosebumps rising, feel every hair stand on end, feel her toes going numb… She crouched and turned her attention to her legs, and her toes, almost feverishly. For several minutes, she switched back and forth, trying as best she could to create as much heat as possible for her limbs. But the more she did so, the more her priorities changed – despite her best efforts to keep her goal in mind. She forced herself to stand and return to the cool wall; she flinched when the palms of her hands came in contact with it and shivered, but willed her feet to shift over the ground, to search for anything that would help her get out.

Thirty minutes of searching ended up being in vain. There was nothing there to gain some sort of upper hand. “Nonononono…” She patted the walls, the same wall with the indent in it from fifteen minutes ago, and tried to breathe calmly. Her breaths came in short, shallow bursts, on the verge of hyperventilating. “C’mon, c’mon, c’mon!” She cried, pounding the metal with her fists. It didn’t give in, much less budge. Shaking, she focused most of her frustrated energy into her hands and gave one last pound. “**** it!” Trembling hands slipped down the rough metal of the wall. Zema sat against it, bringing her knees to her chest as she rubbed her arms. Pinching her eyes shut, she let her head hit the wall behind her multiple times, cursing softly under her breath.

If you hadn’t gone off chasing that stupid myth, you wouldn’t be here right now. Part of her hissed. You’d be at home trying to dye that leather armor for the fifth time this week. Or out searching for gems on the plains with your foxes. She sighed.
Her foxes… All of her eight vixen Lieutenants… They were probably at home, whining and pushing their food bowels around the house, waiting for her to come home and feed them. All but for Edelweiss (who was probably happy to be laying around) and Rusalka, trying to bark out orders to the other seven. Zakima the tiger would be likely to be pawing around in the Garden, looking for heaven’s only knew what. Or maybe all of them would be looking for her. She almost chuckled at the thought. She doubted it; the silly critters could barely manage to get out of a base without her help. None of them would be looking for her. They wouldn’t even know where to start!

Groaning, she clawed at her head. No one is coming for me. I’m trapped…
A sudden burst of cold air whipped around her, making her shiver. It was freezing! It was… Zema looked up. It was air. There was a hole somewhere! There had to be, otherwise it wouldn’t have picked up like that. Yes! She crept away from the wall, and followed the direction of cold air. The closer she seemed to get to it, the more the temperature dropped. Near the center of the room, she could hear something on the other side.

Ping ping ping, YA!
Ping ping ping, YA!

She blinked. What could that…
The maiden crawled closer. Her hands slipped on something ice-cold and slippery, unbalancing her form and almost making her fall on her stomach. But her knees held her steady on solid ground. She retreated, and ran a finger along the floor in an attempt to identify it. What is…
It was freezing cold. And rigid. And growing…
She gasped.
Ice!
But from whe…

Ping, ping, ping, YA!! Light filtered in as the wall came crumbling down; blinded, her arms retreated and covered them protectively. Hushed footfalls came from in front of her, akin to… Zema crawled back.

“It’s alright now,” Her voice was a yew through autumn leaves. “Follow my voice.” The sound alone bewildered the young lady. Who was… That…? The tone was warm and inviting, and whoever it was had shed light into the dark chamber she’d been stuck in.
“Why…?” she asked, mostly to herself.
“Answer my call… And I’ll set you free.”

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