so..uhh what exactly are you asking treydobe?Do you want to be in my story,help with it or..hhmmmm?As far as help i could always use some one to provide me with an accurate time line,or information during a certain area I am writing about(for instance I know part of the battle took place in wu,but can not remember the other two lands Sun ce took over...
also any mistakes(other than grammer or spelling...I am crude at that)will be appreiciated if pointed out.An finallly any music links would be appriciated.alright I rambled enough...now for the next page....
Robflame twisted his neck from side to side easing out the kink in it.Behind him he could here the shuffle of feet,the stamp of horse hooves an the clink of armour.He tasted the bitterness of lipstick on his mouth from the bar wench he had been wooing,and seen the slight purpling of the bruise on his eye ,after the bar wenches husband had arrived to give his opinion of Rob kissing his wife....and the ensuing bar fight that followed.He turned to the woman beside him she noticed his look and said in discust"you are such a pig"and with her gloved hand made a shoooing gesture.Robflames face cracked open in a wolfish grin and he said to his second in command with the soft light brown hair and dark tanned skin"ahhh...you know you want all the magnifisense that is me astraea..."he teased.she made a chocking noise in her throat,her hand drifting to the ironsword at her hip"you havve to be kidding me you swine!"she remarked "kihmo tell this fool for the last time I am not inerested in this womanising idiot!'she remarked,waving the other officer in the line of sight over.
kihmo gave them both an unamused expression and made three hacking motions with his tyrant sword-his message clear(bugger off)Mai on the otherside covered her chin with the back of her hand and llet out a soft chuckle that sounded like a babbling brook.She eased up to Rob her eyes smoky and murmured clicking her tounge"mmmm...I can show you what a real woman can do..."she purred and wrapped her whip around his neck gently,he quickly untangled it..turning pail"umm...get back in your formation,Mai"he ordered.She llet out a soft chuckle,batting her eye lashes at him and blowing a kiss to kihmo"when are we gonna kill somten?"Xavot asked swinging his Twin picks around and almost dismembering a soldier luckless enough to be to close."YAY!"grief yelled swinging his own twin picks violently about.
"settle down you two."Ai said absently while cleaning off her beloved scimatar.Arturia flipped her hand axe in the air twice catching it"this waiting around is killing me!"she snapped"you all can go home,Shizuma is here....to win this battle single handedly"the man said jabbing hids long spear in several overdone and exaggerated motions.
"ahh...the idiot and his little spear..."Meiling said softly wracking her statagist fan across the arrogant mans eyes dismissivly and smirked at his howl of pain"thats enough of that!"Robflame barked,Mailing turned giving him an insolent smirk and turned her profile enough to distract him with her alluring female form...he gulped despite himself.She let out a throaty chuckle"you are right Astraea...he is a pig,but then are not all men?""let us focus on the battle...not such petty bickering"Xiaolin suggested flint scrapping against the sharp point of her spear,wetstone bringing it to razor sharpness.Death beside his own regiment only gave an agreeing nod,as he examined the reigns of each of his calverymen.
<---You lie!it was a link! :(