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CestuN

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PostedMar 20, 2011 5:32 pm

Re: Story of Sophire

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Story of Sophire

Two decades ago, before the time of Dong Zhuo and Allied forces war began, in the lands of Wu, a boy named Sophire once lived.

During Sophire's childhood years, he learned a lot of stories about heroic legends and was inspired to be like one of them. At this same age, he was taught by his father to hold a sword and other weapons, so that, he will be able to fight someday if necessary. His patriotic personality to fight for China encouraged him to go on an adventure that will furthermore make his dreams come true. At age 20, he then enlisted in the military under Sun family's command and sworn to fight for Mirisha in order to protect his family and the people living peacefully in this land.


Going back to the childhood years, there was a day before going out with his father to hunt some deer, he heard a voice outside his home. Sophire heard an argument between his parents and soldiers of unknown origin regarding paying tax. His parents could not afford to pay the tax imposed to them and those soldiers were not even the one in charge of the territorial control. Angrily, one of the soldiers stabbed his mother. His father then rushed to aid her but due to being heavily wounded, his mother passed away. His father tried to fight back, swinging his fist on one of the soldiers and managed to take his sword, which, he then used to slash the other soldier's right arm. Sophire tried to help as well by using his spear and stabbing one of soldiers on the back. They desperately fought back and ignoring the fact they were outnumbered and over powered. His father then rush to Sophire as he saw one of the soldiers about to attack him. His father got struck by a sword on the back and fell down on the floor. Thanks to Sophire's father, he was saved from harm and delivered a fatal blow on the remaining soldiers. The fight then subsided, however, his father also passed away.

Sophire then head out of his home with his spear in his hand and saw the whole town in flames. The soldiers that was killed by Sophire and his father were from the same army marching around town killing innocent people. The soldiers then tried to chase him. He got shot by an arrow but still managed to escape.

At the end, he then ended up on Sun family's palace. He was brought inside and well treated. Thanks for the great hospitality by Sun's people, Sophire survived. After few days of rest, he went to Sun Jian and devoted himself to be one his loyal follower and fight for the people of Mirisha.

Sophire : I must fulfill the promise that I had given to my father. I will once again bring peace on this land for the sake of my father, my mother and the people who died in the hands of those unmerciful soldiers.  


Haha you got skills I must say. Maybe one day you will become a famous writer? Why not start now .Wink

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PostedMar 28, 2011 6:34 pm
Interesting, quite interesting. Only read the first few due to lack of time, but I just might follow this.

Tiffa88

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PostedApr 16, 2011 3:04 am
i hope you are still revamping these stories Shou. i cant wait to see mine Very Happy

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PostedApr 19, 2011 1:34 pm   Last edited by jadenyuki84 on Apr 21, 2011 9:04 am. Edited 2 times in total

Story of Shisuan

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Story of Shisuan

In an unnamed village, a lady named Suhui once lived. At the age of four, her mother passed away. But this didn't affect her much because since she is the only child of the Xing family, her father Shuang cherished his little blossom; though watch over her in a strictly manner.

Suhui looked up at the stars every night and remembered her mother's stories about the Three Kingdoms. Her mother shows great admiration on the kingdom Wu by speaking of its name in her stories most of the time. Traveled in land of Wu, met many famous figures such as "The Tiger of Jiang Dong, The Little Conqueror, The Two Qiaos and Lady Sun". Felt with much admiration upon listening to her mother's stories, Suhui desired to one day visit the land of Wu. However, her father objected because of the fear that she might get harmed as this kingdom was at war.

Suhui ran away despite of her father's objections. She desperately wanted to experience the world that her mother once had.

As she began to start a new life in the kingdom of Wu, she abandoned all of her possessions including her own name. She was no longer known as Suhui but rather known as Shisuan.


Shisuan : Mother, I will never forget the stories that you once told me. Deep inside my heart, I cherish every time that I had spent with you. Honoring your memories, I wish to be part of this kingdom and bring peace to the people of this land.

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PostedApr 19, 2011 1:43 pm

Story

Story of Shisuan added.

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PostedApr 19, 2011 2:27 pm
Thank you! ^^ I enjoyed it!



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PostedFeb 17, 2013 2:05 pm
good stories Shou Shou Smile
(sorry I can't think of anything else to say Embarassed )

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