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skywerewolf

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PostedMar 07, 2011 11:33 pm

Story: part one: a life of worth

Just writing again. tell me what you think.
The bead was recently vacated. It's owner, while they always tried to make sure they slept enough, could easily be interrupted in the night. This plagued many soldiers, but as a magician for his guild he had the ability to preform revivals. Those kept allies going even after they have suffered lethal wounds, mainly vorpal slashes. Once dead people remained dead, but if you get to somebody fast enough then even after they have died then they still be brought back. This was also useful for ensuring that somebody can't bring any warriors back that may threaten the peace within a faction.

While the bed was empty its owner was carrying a young woman to her bed. Sky Wolf (Known mainly as sky, name origen is unknown, magician for the Imperial Seal Guild, has more powerful magic than most but is also slower to cast, Assumed to be a womanizer due to all of his female followers, doesn't care about the female form) sighed as he knew she had worked herself to sickness. He went back to bed and noticed one of his other bodyguards was already up, organizing his house.

"Don't make any noise or I force you back into the bed, bright eyes." Sky said putting his head back on his pillow. He slept again and was woken up to the sound of somebody being slapped. He didn't like his habit of attacking people pop up by his bed while he was sleeping, but for his friend it was an almost perfect action for him. The problem was not rudeness, but suddenness. instead of just busting in, he just popped up in front of Sky.

Trey (drunk stratagist, brawler of the Imperial Seal guild, resembles a dog after 2 drinks, gets drunk after the third) was always energetic about fighting, and would have died years ago were it not for the magic system. Sky was always annoyed when he got a wake up call from his friend too early in the morning.

"Hey! Hey! Hey! I totally need to get to the battlefield, now! It's almost time! Don't leave me waiting!" This time he made such a loud thud that a few people looked over at the house just to make sure it didn't fall apart. Sky always got annoyed when somebody mentioned the shift. This was partly because he was one of the mages doing it, partly because of where he will end up, even if he does meet Leia.

"Whatever happened to that fan?" Sky asked to nobody in particular while Trey took out a baozi. "Well, I think you deserve this." Sky said and smacked Trey with a small slip of wood. The seal was used to quickly travel to any front.

"I think she threw it away after you defeated her leader." Trey mumbled looking at the wood used to make the seal. "Saying something about "now she no longer needs ties to her former self" or something. Where is she?" Trey asked, surprised he did not have red marks on both sides of his face.

"She has fallen ill. I'm not sure what it is, but she is very sick. I'm just glad I have others who can take care of her work. She really does work way too much. Anyway, I need to go see something." Sky finished walking out while trey suddenly vanished.

Zuo Ci was waiting outside.

"I take it you are ready to return to the site?"
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PostedMar 08, 2011 3:32 pm

Re: Story: part one: a life of worth

Just writing again. tell me what you think.
skywerewolf wrote:
The bead was recently vacated. It's owner, while they always tried to make sure they slept enough, could easily be interrupted in the night. This plagued many soldiers, but as a magician for his guild he had the ability to preform revivals. Those kept allies going even after they have suffered lethal wounds, mainly vorpal slashes. Once dead people remained dead, but if you get to somebody fast enough then even after they have died then they still be brought back. This was also useful for ensuring that somebody can't bring any warriors back that may threaten the peace within a faction.

While the bed was empty its owner was carrying a young woman to her bed. Sky Wolf (Known mainly as sky, name origen is unknown, magician for the Imperial Seal Guild, has more powerful magic than most but is also slower to cast, Assumed to be a womanizer due to all of his female followers, doesn't care about the female form) sighed as he knew she had worked herself to sickness. He went back to bed and noticed one of his other bodyguards was already up, organizing his house.

"Don't make any noise or I force you back into the bed, bright eyes." Sky said putting his head back on his pillow. He slept again and was woken up to the sound of somebody being slapped. He didn't like his habit of attacking people pop up by his bed while he was sleeping, but for his friend it was an almost perfect action for him. The problem was not rudeness, but suddenness. instead of just busting in, he just popped up in front of Sky.

Trey (drunk stratagist, brawler of the Imperial Seal guild, resembles a dog after 2 drinks, gets drunk after the third) was always energetic about fighting, and would have died years ago were it not for the magic system. Sky was always annoyed when he got a wake up call from his friend too early in the morning.

"Hey! Hey! Hey! I totally need to get to the battlefield, now! It's almost time! Don't leave me waiting!" This time he made such a loud thud that a few people looked over at the house just to make sure it didn't fall apart. Sky always got annoyed when somebody mentioned the shift. This was partly because he was one of the mages doing it, partly because of where he will end up, even if he does meet Leia.

"Whatever happened to that fan?" Sky asked to nobody in particular while Trey took out a baozi. "Well, I think you deserve this." Sky said and smacked Trey with a small slip of wood. The seal was used to quickly travel to any front.

"I think she threw it away after you defeated her leader." Trey mumbled looking at the wood used to make the seal. "Saying something about "now she no longer needs ties to her former self" or something. Where is she?" Trey asked, surprised he did not have red marks on both sides of his face.

"She has fallen ill. I'm not sure what it is, but she is very sick. I'm just glad I have others who can take care of her work. She really does work way too much. Anyway, I need to go see something." Sky finished walking out while trey suddenly vanished.

Zuo Ci was waiting outside.

"I take it you are ready to return to the site?"  


I wonder who I shall face in battle, hopefully I don't end up like Zhang Fei the drunken fool xD

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PostedMar 09, 2011 12:00 am

Final of part one.

part 2 of part one.
"You know that most religion is just nonsense." Sky said looking at the paintings. This was easier said to a taoist master after you have learned a bit. He looked at the details with some respect.

"I'm very aware of what "he" thinks, "young man" and to be honest I don't care for it at this time. Another would be quite well, but now is not." Zuo said preparing two mats on the floor.

"Why do people keep talking about my thoughts as if I was "him"!?" Sky suddenly asked loudly. Anybody who knew him more than just another magic user would always reference his ideals and knowlage as if Sky was a certain other person. This annoyed Sky more then mention of the reset.

"In time, you will become aware of that reason. For now, you sit on the mat." Zuo added with a slight smirk. Sky looked at the mat. It was unusually well made. He sat and Ci was across from on the giant Yin Yang. They started chanting and then the area shifted. The house that appeared was serene. The walls were finally back, and they were just as strong as ever. The small pond out front was clear, and pure. 10 giant ink pots were stacked on the side that hadden't been there before.

"So, this is the area. the walls are real, as well. This is very interesting." Ci said standing up and looking around. The mats were gone along with all of the markings, but something else was under Sky.

"Gahhhh!" Sky yelled in anguish. The metal handle was sharp, and sticking right into Sky's backside. He quickly got up as Yuanfang chuckled. It was a blue feather fan, small letters drawn on it, with a single white feather, and a bronze handle.

"So, that is the memory that you hate so much." Ci remarked, looking at it.

"Leia, you burned it here?" Sky asked as he looked at the sky, now night. He held the fan up, and tried to look at it in the moonlight. A star shot across the night sky. Sky's arm dropped and he fell to his knees. A second later he heard the howl that marked his worse fears. His hands trembled he was trying to control his breathing. Zuo Ci came by Sky and patted him on the back.

"I think we should go pay our respects to her." Yuanfang said pulling out a small seal. They had vanished for a moment, leaving the memories to remain there, all but one fan that was now removed.

Trey was right there in Sky's house when he appeared there. He was not as distressed as Sky, but he was still trying to resist crying. Leia's body was lied out on the floor, her eyes closed and arms across her body. Sky sat there, in disbelief, looking at the body. Sky was in such emotional distress that he had forgot that he forgot he was holding her fan. He was just stunned at how fast it happened to her. This was by no means a surprise to Sky. He had known since day one that she was going to die early, but after the days they spent together he could not belive that the moment was finally here. Glenda poked him on the arm and pulled out a small metal object.

"She said she made this for you." Glenda said, helping Carol lift the body after giving it to Sky. He read the inscription. Sky was surprised because it was written in English.

"I want to thank you for giving me something to live for again. You freed me from my own emotion and my self made prison. I guess I really want to say thanks for giving me a life worth living. No, I always had that, even before I met you. I want to thank you for giving me even more than before. Giving me a life of worth."

Sky sat there, the silence overwhelming him. After an hour of sitting there, he looked up and saw Zuo Ci again.

"I think you should come, then. We can prepare early for the reset, and leave them to finish up. I'm going to say this to you right now, though. She is dead, no matter what you do in the reset. She will no longer exist, and that locket is all that is left of her."

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PostedMar 09, 2011 12:21 am

May I join in...?

I like it so far :D
Hey just wanted to know, if I may join in? I like it so far. And oh, are you somewhat staying in cannon or no?

I'm alive. Good to see you are too.

skywerewolf

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PostedMar 09, 2011 6:55 am

Re: May I join in...?

I like it so far :D
BlueDemonica wrote:
Hey just wanted to know, if I may join in? I like it so far. And oh, are you somewhat staying in cannon or no?  

Sorry, but I'm more trying for characters from my in game guild for now. I will consider your offer, for later, though. I know the guild better, so I can write that better.

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PostedMar 09, 2011 2:11 pm

Re: May I join in...?

I like it so far :D
skywerewolf wrote:
BlueDemonica wrote:
Hey just wanted to know, if I may join in? I like it so far. And oh, are you somewhat staying in cannon or no?  

Sorry, but I'm more trying for characters from my in game guild for now. I will consider your offer, for later, though. I know the guild better, so I can write that better.  


Alright :3 It's great work though, can't wait to read more Very Happy

I'm alive. Good to see you are too.

skywerewolf

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PostedMar 09, 2011 6:35 pm

Re: May I join in...?

I like it so far :D
BlueDemonica wrote:
skywerewolf wrote:
BlueDemonica wrote:
Hey just wanted to know, if I may join in? I like it so far. And oh, are you somewhat staying in cannon or no?  

Sorry, but I'm more trying for characters from my in game guild for now. I will consider your offer, for later, though. I know the guild better, so I can write that better.  


Alright :3 It's great work though, can't wait to read more Very Happy  

Thank you very much. Also, I will stay mostly cannon. This will center around smaller conflicts that are out of the way of larger battles. That's so I have more room to maneuver the plot.
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