em. I'll be the first to say something here I guess. I did read the entire thing, as I'm no stranger to "adult reads" (50 Shades anyone? ;P) but, a few things:
Perhaps posting a link to this story on a livejournal post, blogger, or something off Aeria would be a bit better than posting the entire story here. I'm pretty sure this kind of story posted so openly could get this thread deleted.
A better disclaimer is in need. Adult read could mean a few things like drug use, intense violence, heavy blood and gore. I'd say something along the lines of "Warning: Strong sexual content" would be more accurate.
With that being said, I'm not sure what the intent of this thread was. Are you looking for comments, critiques, opinions or just wanted to get it out there? Is this a story you wrote, a friend wrote, or you found?