I love it I love it :)
I like how you protrait Extreme's character. She is a killing machine on the battle field when she put on her armor. But under that torn and weary set of armor, all she want is peace and the balance of Teos...
Good God Tessa is still alive*I don't want to be public enemy #1 hehe..
While terrifying, I think the author portrays you/your character with enough of a heart that we'd still be fine having a beer with you in the black market and exchanging stories.
That said, it can't stop me from being scared **** of meeting Extreme on any battlefield. XD